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Used to the sounds of

Fenced in
Boundary independence
Waging wars of survival
Restless
Though motivated by
Inaccurate predictions
More than we could ask for
-Darwin music

A graceful dive, divine
Below,
Beneath a shadowy surface
Opaque in substance
Says the fall sky
In collision with its twin
Twisted together in love
-Darwin music

Fog dreams puncture the night
Wearing its black cape
Riding swiftly, silently
Playing marbles with the planets
In a utopia realized
Shattered by shards of apathy
Distant and fleeting
-Darwin music [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Corwin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Darwin Music

Contributed by Corwin on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 12:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Used to the sounds of
Used to the sounds of

Fenced in
Boundary independence
Waging wars of survival
Restless
Though motivated by
Inaccurate predictions
More than we could ask for
-Darwin music

A graceful dive, divine
Below,
Beneath a shadowy surface
Opaque in substance
Says the fall sky
In collision with its twin
Twisted together in love
-Darwin music

Fog dreams puncture the night
Wearing its black cape
Riding swiftly, silently
Playing marbles with the planets
In a utopia realized
Shattered by shards of apathy
Distant and fleeting
-Darwin music

Copyright © Corwin ... [ 2005-03-10 12:50:41]
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Re: Darwin Music (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:29:48 PM AEST
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that was a different write, quite different from my write, i understand it, although i free write, more so than actually writing poetry. but it was very good...

Re: Darwin Music (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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Deep and interesting. I liked it. Nice work.

Re: Darwin Music (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:04:59 AM AEST
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The first stanza... I am not sure if it sounds right being wrote twice, but I think the rest of the poem was done well. Nice write...
Jodi

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