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For I have lost hope in dreams.
A million tears cryed,
And this is my final scream.

Tell Myself Goodbye,
For I have lost hope in life.
Another reason to die,
And this is my ending strife

Tell Myself Goodbye,
For I have lost hope in me.
Such a life of lies,
And this is my reason to not be
~
By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would also kill the one I love
She would also die.
Killing herself, staining a beautiful white dove

By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would choose to leave her alone
She would forever cry
Killing herself, being without an escape from home
~
By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would be telling you goodbye too.
I could'nt do that, and you know why.
I love,
And live for
YOU
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Tell Myself Goodbye

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 01:39:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tell Myself Goodbye,
For I have lost hope in dreams.
A million tears cryed,
And this is my final scream.

Tell Myself Goodbye,
For I have lost hope in life.
Another reason to die,
And this is my ending strife

Tell Myself Goodbye,
For I have lost hope in me.
Such a life of lies,
And this is my reason to not be
~
By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would also kill the one I love
She would also die.
Killing herself, staining a beautiful white dove

By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would choose to leave her alone
She would forever cry
Killing herself, being without an escape from home
~
By Telling Myself Goodbye,
I would be telling you goodbye too.
I could'nt do that, and you know why.
I love,
And live for
YOU
...

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-03-10 01:39:37]
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Re: Tell Myself Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:43:17 AM AEST
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A sad heartfelt write full of emotion.
Expressed so well and deep.
Killing one's self is not the answer for the grief remains on those we leave behind.
Hope all is well for you. Take care and thanks for sharing your poem

Re: Tell Myself Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:00:48 AM AEST
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wow this is really beautiful and touching write. i feel that way too, i think about killing myself evryday but like you, i keep living for the ones i love. thats the only reason.
thanks for your honesty and your brilliant words of truth. good job

Re: Tell Myself Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:10:49 AM AEST
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for me, the only things keeping me together right now are those that care. with out them i'd be dead and 6 foot under...
this poem is based on exactly how i feel.
thankyou for posting it, it's been a strong reminder for why i should live.

Re: Tell Myself Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by RazorBladeWar on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:02:27 PM AEST
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OMG WHAT AN AMAZING POEM!!! do you mind if i put this in my poem book but put YOUR name underneath it! i SWEAR i won't claim it as my own!

Re: Tell Myself Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:38:16 PM AEST
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sometimes you remind me so much of patricks poems. ::heavy sigh:: hopefully there would never be a reason to say goodbye to yourself...

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