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Array ( [sid] => 87016 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Twisted Joke [time] => 2005-03-09 21:58:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => On the outside I look controlled, I look safe
But enter my mind and prepare to be lost
In Hate
In Anger
In Envy
The cigarets calm me
The pills control me... for awhile
The hate rises
The anger overcomes
Im use to this feeling by now
In a way its my friend
But run, run while you can
I cant stop myself
What the ***** have I done?
Pick your fights, choose your battles
But they find me, they hunt me down
What am I to do?
Im in constant search of help
The tears start
The blood flows
Im losing control
Save me.. from myself
I see the dark sky turn into light
But its not real, it never is..
Its just an illusion
A twisted joke I play on myself
Now Im alone shivering in the corner
Cold...
You can see the terror, the fright
You know this could be my last night
Thank you world for showing me the true meaning of cruelty
Good bye everyone
You all know my name but you don’t know me
Soon... very soon I will be free [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 36 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Twisted Joke

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:58:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



On the outside I look controlled, I look safe
But enter my mind and prepare to be lost
In Hate
In Anger
In Envy
The cigarets calm me
The pills control me... for awhile
The hate rises
The anger overcomes
Im use to this feeling by now
In a way its my friend
But run, run while you can
I cant stop myself
What the ***** have I done?
Pick your fights, choose your battles
But they find me, they hunt me down
What am I to do?
Im in constant search of help
The tears start
The blood flows
Im losing control
Save me.. from myself
I see the dark sky turn into light
But its not real, it never is..
Its just an illusion
A twisted joke I play on myself
Now Im alone shivering in the corner
Cold...
You can see the terror, the fright
You know this could be my last night
Thank you world for showing me the true meaning of cruelty
Good bye everyone
You all know my name but you don’t know me
Soon... very soon I will be free




Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2005-03-09 21:58:10]
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Re: Twisted Joke (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:16:29 PM AEST
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i feel honered posting a comment first lol its that good .. very good write i can see your emptions very clearly .. i love dark poems like this and you just gave me a good one to enjoy reading .. great job !


Re: Twisted Joke (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:17:04 AM AEST
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this is one of the best poems ive read in ages. its so sad and the first two lines
"On the outside I look controlled, I look safe
But enter my mind and prepare to be lost" they absolutely blew me away. top job. i feel this way too, i think im a little messed up so i can relate. great great great work and I love the last stanza too and the line "Thank you world for showing me the true meaning of cruelty
Good bye everyone" just frikin AWESOME, wish i could write like this. keep it up


Re: Twisted Joke (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:16:16 AM AEST
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it's dark and frightening...
but good.
and i can see why you want to do it, but i wouldn't...


Re: Twisted Joke (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:04:19 PM AEST
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TIGHT. YOU CAN EXPRESS YOURSELF WELL, BUT IF YOU GO , THEN YOU WONT TOUCH OTHERS




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