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The verses echo silently
And are heard vehemently.

No one believes
In your creed.
No one can see
A reason to be
In need.

I've been lost on my own way
And shadowed by the light of day.

Verses are written in blood stains
With a repetition at each refrain
By sorrowful tear splotches of pain.
Promised hope was never gained,
And the sun's light as waned. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 11 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Verses of Truth?

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 07:43:30 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Verses of Truth?

The verses echo silently
And are heard vehemently.

No one believes
In your creed.
No one can see
A reason to be
In need.

I've been lost on my own way
And shadowed by the light of day.

Verses are written in blood stains
With a repetition at each refrain
By sorrowful tear splotches of pain.
Promised hope was never gained,
And the sun's light as waned.

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-09 19:43:30]
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Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 07:51:17 PM AEST
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I'm not sure what to say but that I liked it. I thought the lines:
"I've been lost on my own way
And shadowed by the light of day."
were my favorite - definitely a really interesting look, very original thought.
Awesome job again - I always like to notice when you've posted stuff lol.

~Waos/Kara

Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:17:13 PM AEST
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Great write Jennifer. I respect all your comments made in the forum of recent on the religious question that was presented. Much peace to you. Laura

Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:27:15 PM AEST
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"Verses are written in blood stains
With a repetition at each refrain
By sorrowful tear splotches of pain.
Promised hope was never gained,
And the sun's light as waned."
Wow....Beautifully written.

Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 12:41:41 AM AEST
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I like the concluding lines though each line is perfectly done..
" promised hope was never gained and
the sunlight as waned" -Thats a truth being exerienced by many of us..Jenni, I am really attracted to your poetry :-) venkat

Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 12:45:03 AM AEST
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Yes Jen you once again smother another topic with your greatness...as always and once again with a great power

Clark

Re: Verses of Truth? (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:00:22 PM AEST
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ooh, i liked this one. and again, it was especially the last verse because i have written about that myself at times. what a great way of addressing it here, the waning of the sun's light, promised hope, it was really handled well, you conveyed your ideas clearly and thoroughly. tasty :P

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