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Array ( [sid] => 8697 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE? [time] => 2002-12-16 20:00:00 [hometext] => F is for the False appearence
R is for Real life
I is for I never learned till I fell
E is for the sooner or later End
D is for Dream of perfection
S is for Submit your comments:) [bodytext] => We've became so close in a very short while
I thought you're the friend so good and true
But everything changed i don't know why
You disappointed me,i was fooled by you

Misunderstanding,it happens,it's no war
some from me,lots from you,enough!shut this door
Let's forget and bring back what we had before
Didn't work,i wonder what you wanted more

Did i ever hurt you somehow?
why do you have to do this now?

I can't believe you chose this unexpected end
How could you?!it's the last thind i expect

Easy you forget and easy you replace
I became nothing but an old trace

Take off the picture of us you had on your wall
Erase my number you will not call

give me the secrets i kept with you
For i'll never share it with someone new

But when i think that you were not worth it
I cheer up and stop feeling bad that we split

A good lesson in life i learned and won
False appearence,trust no one!

I 'm not blaming you coz you don't like to be blamed
But if i were you,i'd be very very ashamed

I wonder if i'll ever find a FRIEND that would
Be all what the word Friendship include [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 16 [informant] => bravepen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE?

Contributed by bravepen on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



We've became so close in a very short while
I thought you're the friend so good and true
But everything changed i don't know why
You disappointed me,i was fooled by you

Misunderstanding,it happens,it's no war
some from me,lots from you,enough!shut this door
Let's forget and bring back what we had before
Didn't work,i wonder what you wanted more

Did i ever hurt you somehow?
why do you have to do this now?

I can't believe you chose this unexpected end
How could you?!it's the last thind i expect

Easy you forget and easy you replace
I became nothing but an old trace

Take off the picture of us you had on your wall
Erase my number you will not call

give me the secrets i kept with you
For i'll never share it with someone new

But when i think that you were not worth it
I cheer up and stop feeling bad that we split

A good lesson in life i learned and won
False appearence,trust no one!

I 'm not blaming you coz you don't like to be blamed
But if i were you,i'd be very very ashamed

I wonder if i'll ever find a FRIEND that would
Be all what the word Friendship include




Copyright © bravepen ... [ 2002-12-16 20:00:00]
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Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE? (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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I like this. It's really good, and it shows what happens in friendships. But trust me, I thought like that and I found a true friend, her names Damara. She's the one that brought me to this site, you might know her as MoonlitAngel.

YS


Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE? (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:36:48 PM AEST
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True friends are hard to come by you just have to stick with it! Great write! Christina


Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:45:45 PM AEST
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Aww this is sad...i been here in this place before it hurts very deeply....this brought back memories for me of long ago....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed reading it..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: FRIENDSHIP?!WHERE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 11:41:50 PM AEST
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Nicely done..welcome to ypdc...
Jenni




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