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Array ( [sid] => 8695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Night On The Beach [time] => 2002-12-16 19:20:00 [hometext] => This one is written about a dream I had about the man I love. [bodytext] => Once upon a moonlit night
we walked a lonely beach.
Stars twinklled high above
they seemed close enough to reach.

Arm in arm the mood was set,
gulls rested here and there.
We chatted for a little while
our talk light as air.

This moment would be priceless,
it would last throughout the years.
A quick exchange of, "I love you's"
washed away our hidden fears.

Water rippled in the moonlight,
soft sand beneath our feet.
What a time to hear, and so sincere,
an, " I love you," so sweet.

Two lovers in the night
hand in hand we stroll the beach.
Gazing up to see the stars
almost close enough to reach. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Night On The Beach

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Once upon a moonlit night
we walked a lonely beach.
Stars twinklled high above
they seemed close enough to reach.

Arm in arm the mood was set,
gulls rested here and there.
We chatted for a little while
our talk light as air.

This moment would be priceless,
it would last throughout the years.
A quick exchange of, "I love you's"
washed away our hidden fears.

Water rippled in the moonlight,
soft sand beneath our feet.
What a time to hear, and so sincere,
an, " I love you," so sweet.

Two lovers in the night
hand in hand we stroll the beach.
Gazing up to see the stars
almost close enough to reach.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-12-16 19:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem, one i know that if i had i definately wouldn't forget...thanks for sharing this one, and by tha way there's a forum started on Dreamz if you wanna get involved there ....hehe....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 12:01:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ShadowsCloud.... very nice imagery!!
Jenni

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:51:25 AM AEST
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You do have some lovely dreams Candice,
and you get them down in words so well!
Excellent writing as usual from you here!

I did write you a quick message this morn; just to wish you a Happy Christmas, but it's still sat in my outbox!

So do have a wonderful Christmas Candice and family, I wish for you the best of everything I can and can't think of.

All my love
Dean:-)

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:35:38 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you liked this one. I really enjoyed writing this one because it was one of those the jus flowed naturally. I did not have to think about it at all.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:56:50 PM AEST
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beautiful poem great visuals

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