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In the lasting silence
I can only hear this
Throughout my misery
With chords struck bitterly

The angels singing
On the wings of death
The dead are mourning
With the life they left

The chords of dead notes
Sung with nonexistent voices
That have abandoned all hopes
Of making the right choices

Dying from the misery of living
Lost in the silence of only hearing
The chords of death that bring
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Silent Misery

Contributed by essentially9 on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Silent Misery

In the lasting silence
I can only hear this
Throughout my misery
With chords struck bitterly

The angels singing
On the wings of death
The dead are mourning
With the life they left

The chords of dead notes
Sung with nonexistent voices
That have abandoned all hopes
Of making the right choices

Dying from the misery of living
Lost in the silence of only hearing
The chords of death that bring
The angels that no longer sing

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Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:40:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful Jen, I really love this:

The angels singing
On the wings of death
The dead are mourning
With the life they left

Clark

Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:50:14 PM AEST
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so etheral, ive become lost within this poem.......... i absolutely love it:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 10:47:09 PM AEST
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"Throughout my misery
With chords struck bitterly"
"The chords of death that bring
The angels that no longer sing"

You did a really good job on this - simple and flowing and a dark
and sad, yet beautiful picture painted in my mind. Once again, I loved
reading this. I hope you'll find the good in this too and find hope that lasts.

Take care,
~Waos/Kara

Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:13:42 AM AEST
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"angels singing on the wings of death..with non existent voices.."..Awww..jenni you are always amazing..:-) venkat

Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:18:55 AM AEST
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this is a great write, it has a good flow from start to finish, and each stanza is beautifully done

... in words electrique

Re: Silent Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:57:24 PM AEST
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Within these four stanzas I saw a beautiful
and very poetic poem. I loved it all as the
imagery was seared into my head. I think the
first two lines of the 3rd stanza were my
favourite, but the whole poem was brilliantly
crafted.
"The chords of dead notes
Sung with nonexistent voices"

Bobo (Joel)

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