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Array ( [sid] => 86882 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hold Me [time] => 2005-03-08 18:16:31 [hometext] => um yeah i had somebody in mind :laugh laugh: when i wrote this .. please please comment .. i never have many comments [bodytext] => Hold Me

Hold me in your arms
And never let me go
Never let me see the monsters
That hurt people so

Whisper in my ear
How much you love me
That you値l never let my heart cry
Us forever is what you see

Will you please
Protect from harm ?
And would you please
Keep my insides warm ?

The world is sometimes mean
And can make me feel small
Then can you swoop me in your arms
And break this invisible wall ?

Surround yourself with all of me
And in return I値l give you my love
To have and to cherish
And to thank the heavens above

I need a shoulder
To cry away my pains
I need a man
Who痴 love will flow in my veins

A man who値l
Love me till the end
Even when he learns more about me
His heart will never bend

Hold me please
In your arms
Before it all disappears
That is my charms

I really do love you
I hope you feel the same way
Because only you can make me survive
The selfish games life plays.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Xxluckie_lynnxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Hold Me

Contributed by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:16:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Hold Me

Hold me in your arms
And never let me go
Never let me see the monsters
That hurt people so

Whisper in my ear
How much you love me
That you値l never let my heart cry
Us forever is what you see

Will you please
Protect from harm ?
And would you please
Keep my insides warm ?

The world is sometimes mean
And can make me feel small
Then can you swoop me in your arms
And break this invisible wall ?

Surround yourself with all of me
And in return I値l give you my love
To have and to cherish
And to thank the heavens above

I need a shoulder
To cry away my pains
I need a man
Who痴 love will flow in my veins

A man who値l
Love me till the end
Even when he learns more about me
His heart will never bend

Hold me please
In your arms
Before it all disappears
That is my charms

I really do love you
I hope you feel the same way
Because only you can make me survive
The selfish games life plays.




Copyright ツゥ Xxluckie_lynnxX ... [ 2005-03-08 18:16:31]
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Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:35:14 PM AEST
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Hi Lynn,
This is a beautifull write. It's a masterpeice as we all long for these things.
Great writing.
Huggs,
emy


Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:55:26 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet and romantic write! I loved it! Beautifully written!


Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by GeminiDreamer on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. It fully captures the desire one has to have someone around them that they love. God job!


Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by treasure on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:08:25 AM AEST
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really sweet! i like it.


Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:49:55 PM AEST
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This poem touched my heart. Everyone would be blessed to find love the way you portrayed in your poem.

I thought it flawless.

Kie




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