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As I fall I see you passing by

Falling further now

I hear you cry

Lights around me fading fast

Seeing memories of the past

Passing by And fading fast

Deepening darkness Changing light

I've lost all sight

I have no will to fight

Feeling warmer now, I see the light
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Adam Douglas Witt

Copyright ©2004 Adam Douglas Witt

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HOLD

Contributed by wittsworks on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:58:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

HOLD

As I fall I see you passing by

Falling further now

I hear you cry

Lights around me fading fast

Seeing memories of the past

Passing by And fading fast

Deepening darkness Changing light

I've lost all sight

I have no will to fight

Feeling warmer now, I see the light
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Adam Douglas Witt

Copyright ©2004 Adam Douglas Witt

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Copyright Â© wittsworks ... [ 2005-03-08 16:58:59]
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Re: HOLD (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:18:57 PM AEST
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welcom to YPDC, may your life be changed by our words and may your word chang our lifes, please enjoy your stay.

bravo, bravo, this was a tramidusly good poem, I did enjoy it. the mood that the poem started in was far different then the mood at the end the change was so fluid that it seemed not to happen at all, thank you for sharing it with us.

this poem was, for its length, very good your choice of word was powerful, with much to say with out saying alot, I am looking forword to reading more from you, tell then be strong and God bless.

wolfman

Re: HOLD (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:04:45 AM AEST
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Wow! Amazing first write. I truly loved it. I hope you share more of your fine work with us very soon.

Re: HOLD (User Rating: 1 )
by wittsworks on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:52:36 AM AEST
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I really appreciate your comments =)
I hope to find some more time so that I will be able to post some more poems.
I also need to update the poetry on my web site as well.

Thanks again for all of you wonderful comments and thoughts I cant believe that
I use to throw all my poetry in the garbage
Now I wish I had some of them back =)

Seems like there is not enough time in a day! Also the little bit's of free time we do have we put forth all efforts to accomplish all of our tasks in hand "for some reason or another it seems like nothing ever is done "and there is twice the amount of tasks the next day to come!" Weird HUH
Sorry if this makes no sense I am ready for bed good night to you all...

Signed,
Adam Witt

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