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Pain in my heart
I made a mistake
Right from the start
This battered heart like
this shall remain
Until I find the strength
To start all over again
We, I believed had a
beautiful love
Years of memories
Blessed from up above
But sadly I was unaware
of your other love
When I found out
I fell like a wounded dove
You were a heart breaker and
I was your aim
You wounded me
My life will never be the same
This broken, fragile heart in
pieces remains
Unrepairable, shattered and in
excruciating pain. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 48 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Damaged Heart.....

Contributed by mina-1 on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears on my pillow
Pain in my heart
I made a mistake
Right from the start
This battered heart like
this shall remain
Until I find the strength
To start all over again
We, I believed had a
beautiful love
Years of memories
Blessed from up above
But sadly I was unaware
of your other love
When I found out
I fell like a wounded dove
You were a heart breaker and
I was your aim
You wounded me
My life will never be the same
This broken, fragile heart in
pieces remains
Unrepairable, shattered and in
excruciating pain.

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-03-08 16:05:42]
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Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:23:14 PM AEST
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I can't even tell you how this touches me. Tiffany J.

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:27:31 PM AEST
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emotional indeed. i think you did a good job portraying that
well written.

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:43:35 PM AEST
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Wow!! Emotionally charged...great write.
Jenni

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Beniam on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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You know, if I wasn't a guy, I would hate guys. But I'd like me cause I'm a good guy, but a guy none the less... You know what I mean... neways, I hope that day comes soon for you!!!

w/ phi'lia love.
Beni

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by GeminiDreamer on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:28:12 PM AEST
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A perfect representation of what a cheating parnter can do to one's heart. I love it, evert excruciating moment, written perfectly.

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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I MUST SAY THIS IS A GREAT POEM I TOO HAVE BEEN THE VICTOM OF A LYING CHEATING FOOL....BUT IN THE END IT COMES BACK TO THEM...

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 12:28:56 PM AEST
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very emotional great job

Re: Damaged Heart..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:00:27 PM AEST
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Honest and sad write. You expressed yourself with full emotion, and the impact was good.

thanks for sharing this.

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