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almost everytime i begin, my eyes want to cry
i hear your reasons even when not said
i live life without you but it feels like i'm dead
at night, you're all that i see in the dark
i can't turn it off and it breaks my heart
i'm shaking sometimes and i don't even feel it
i numb myself drunk so it doesn't seem real, it
is the worst feeling i have ever felt
this emptiness is a living hell
i beg not just god for personal gain
i would do just about anything
to have you here
to have you near
to have you inside me all over again
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How?So Low...

Contributed by Red_October on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

how do i keep writing with barely a reply?
almost everytime i begin, my eyes want to cry
i hear your reasons even when not said
i live life without you but it feels like i'm dead
at night, you're all that i see in the dark
i can't turn it off and it breaks my heart
i'm shaking sometimes and i don't even feel it
i numb myself drunk so it doesn't seem real, it
is the worst feeling i have ever felt
this emptiness is a living hell
i beg not just god for personal gain
i would do just about anything
to have you here
to have you near
to have you inside me all over again

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2005-03-08 15:22:13]
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Re: How?So Low... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:30:47 PM AEST
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My heart breaks for you. A union of souls once broken can leave one so hollow and empty. Is there any other pain like it? Praying for you, still. The wilderness does end.
Stitch

Re: How?So Low... (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:43:09 PM AEST
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One word ~ Powerful.

Re: How?So Low... (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsLuster on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:32:36 PM AEST
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WoW, I really like this write!! A LOT of emotion is put into it, makes my stomach churn!! It has some interesting form that I don't think that I would use, but that's just me.
It's got good flow, a few little tiny points that might need some working out but the picture was extreamely vivid! Intense emotion, great write!!

Re: How?So Low... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:48:21 PM AEST
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Very emotive and personal write - I think you have iven us a glimpse to your heat and I feel for the sorrow you experience.

thanks for sharing this

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