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Array ( [sid] => 86870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love in Oil [time] => 2005-03-08 14:51:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Key, now, fall out
Your leaving this damn house
My crap, your ****
Trade back all the friendship
Hold on-
Split decision-
Flip for-
The 42 inch television.
I already knew the plans before they arrived,
You keep the boy and i keep the peace of mind.
Close your eyes punk, time to kiss your *** goodbye.
Headstrong, tough luck
Gave your freedom up
Early nights, bashful lies
Been the same since you made the tie
My life, your death
Take back all the promises you ment
My bad, your fault
Never sorry for me feeling left out
My fall, your call
Eight years and now i dont know you at all
Close your eyes punk, time to kiss your *** goodbye. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 6 [informant] => LevyMetal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Love in Oil

Contributed by LevyMetal on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 02:51:40 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Key, now, fall out
Your leaving this damn house
My crap, your ****
Trade back all the friendship
Hold on-
Split decision-
Flip for-
The 42 inch television.
I already knew the plans before they arrived,
You keep the boy and i keep the peace of mind.
Close your eyes punk, time to kiss your *** goodbye.
Headstrong, tough luck
Gave your freedom up
Early nights, bashful lies
Been the same since you made the tie
My life, your death
Take back all the promises you ment
My bad, your fault
Never sorry for me feeling left out
My fall, your call
Eight years and now i dont know you at all
Close your eyes punk, time to kiss your *** goodbye.

Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-03-08 14:51:40]
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Re: Love in Oil (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystic_Beauty_nz on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:08:21 PM AEST
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Like Love.. Love Oil... totally connected with your poem... well done.... to endure freedom we need to know how to live the other side too... a constant reminder of what we do not want in life.... 8 years.. or a life cycle is good for any growing couple to endure even though we grow at different rates.... great expression of emotion

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