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to my little corner of solitude
hope to see you sometime my friend
then maybe I'd show my gratitude

her along the way I'll just say
times have been quite eventful
take any of one of these days
to my health it was detrimental

still figuring things out
one day I'll figure it just right
still wishing I had no doubt
on day I'll figure it just right

I'm coming back again
to my station of peace of mind
wondering if I will know it then
what I dunno cuz its hard to find

here along the way I'll just say
times have been so unusual
keeping every one of these days
to my holding soul it is crucial

I don't want to repeat myself
holding threads to my health
living life I'm someone else
oh well, back to the figuring

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Right

Contributed by daniel on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I'm coming back again
to my little corner of solitude
hope to see you sometime my friend
then maybe I'd show my gratitude

her along the way I'll just say
times have been quite eventful
take any of one of these days
to my health it was detrimental

still figuring things out
one day I'll figure it just right
still wishing I had no doubt
on day I'll figure it just right

I'm coming back again
to my station of peace of mind
wondering if I will know it then
what I dunno cuz its hard to find

here along the way I'll just say
times have been so unusual
keeping every one of these days
to my holding soul it is crucial

I don't want to repeat myself
holding threads to my health
living life I'm someone else
oh well, back to the figuring

#248

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-12-16 15:20:00]
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Re: Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-P-M-Devenish on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 03:48:44 PM AEST
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I really love this one especially the line
'holding threads to my health'

very well done,glad you are back in your corner of solitude as I think your poems grow there.
Best wishes
from
Kay

Re: Right (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:52:42 PM AEST
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Now see danialo i myself am still tryin to figure things out and im old!!! lol...i really enjoyed reading this one im sure you'll remember what prompted you to write it ?...Your poetry is on fire danialo! Absolutely beautiful it is indeed...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:03:40 PM AEST
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Another great one Danny.... I especially like the last two verses.... :)

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