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[aid] => mick
[title] => KILL YOU
[time] => 2005-03-08 05:35:17
[hometext] => For those who wonna die from depression written 1/22/05
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SultryRose's Signatures
Listen up, let's share.
Come sit right over there.
From experience we learn
Many browny points earned.
Don't hate yourself, dear friends.
Hatred will bring quick end.
Oh yes, It'll kill you, kill you.
Suicide robs our presence, not cool.
Use to hate myself
Didn't care about anyone else.
To get thru this life
Gotta let go inner strife.
Each-n-every soul
is importent, don't you know?
So remember Jesus made all.
Luv yourself, his call.
[comments] => 20
[counter] => 288
[topic] => 36
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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KILL YOU
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:35:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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SultryRose's Signatures
Listen up, let's share.
Come sit right over there.
From experience we learn
Many browny points earned.
Don't hate yourself, dear friends.
Hatred will bring quick end.
Oh yes, It'll kill you, kill you.
Suicide robs our presence, not cool.
Use to hate myself
Didn't care about anyone else.
To get thru this life
Gotta let go inner strife.
Each-n-every soul
is importent, don't you know?
So remember Jesus made all.
Luv yourself, his call.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-03-08 05:35:17]
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:46:20 AM AEST
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Good advice, my friend..
Hope you are doing well..
Luv and Hugs
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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A lovely poem with a beautiful image. Written perfectly, flows smoothly with a deep message. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:54:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful stated emy, a most prudent and
compassionate peice of writting well done . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:05:53 PM AEST
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oOo I like this! It's some really good advice, and this is an inspiring poem.
~ Marissa |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:18:32 PM AEST
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intersting, you posted this as a suicide poem but I did not see any where you were going to, but yes there is much more then we know going on in our lives so just live and see what happens.
this is true we do need Him to live the life He gave up, but i still do on occasion hate my self and also try and take my life but this thought is what keeps me from going to far, thank you for sharing it with us, made me feel better thank you. God bless.
wolfman |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:16:46 PM AEST
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| wolfman must be an idiot, you plainly stated this was for other people. anyway, a decent right overall, i guess it would have meant more to me if i was suicidal. |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:20:27 AM AEST
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Awww..wonderful advice...love and hugs.
venkat |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:27:19 PM AEST
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A beautifully written and welcomed piece of poetry you have given us dearest Emy.
An absolute masterpiece, truly divine.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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| i agree with jenni. good message especially emy. keep it up. |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:55:02 AM AEST
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excellent words of wisdom.
johnny. |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:36:41 AM AEST
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Thank you Emmy for lifting my spirits. Have been feeling as though the world is closing in around me of late. Nothing is going right. The doors keep closing on all we try to achieve. Still awaiting the final outcome to it all. Your poem made me see that not all is lost.
Help is there if we learn to help ourselves and continue to try and not fail. I pray for the door to opened once more.
Reading your words has brought me an inner comfort and strength.
I cannot thank you enough.
I read these words just when I was at my lowest.
Time to brush of those cobwebs and continue to live.
Amazing poem that touched my heart in more ways than you can ever imagine
Thank you for sharing
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:44:14 PM AEST
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Good advice,but to someone mired in deep depression; others thoughts may not mean a thing.
Depression is a deep black hole.
Don'tcha think satan has a hold ?
I have been there and my pleas and others prayers helped me through.
Understanding and love is what we owe.
Sinned |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:47:18 PM AEST
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Good advice,but to someone mired in deep depression; others thoughts may not mean a thing.
Depression is a deep black hole.
Don'tcha think satan has a hold ?
I have been there and my pleas and others prayers helped me through.
Understanding and love is what we owe.
Sinned |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:40:33 AM AEST
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Thanks again for posting. It's nice to read things that show hope,
unlike most of the stuff I post which is just dark and down...
it's wonderful to see God using you.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:21:12 AM AEST
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ROCKING POEM WITH COOL PICTURES! LOVED IT!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!! |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Sensommar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:16:13 AM AEST
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| A deeply touching poem that stays inside my heart Acceptence is the key to many things in life Letting God into your life means that you are never alone again A beautiful poem Wishing you a wonderful day , Pia |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by ebooibo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:02:03 AM AEST
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| wow we kinda of write alot keep doing what you do... |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:38:24 PM AEST
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This is really good advice. Thank you for sharing this. It's really help full. I have been thinking about ending my life again, and this has helped. Thanks.
Scott |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by english-pea-pelter on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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great, great write... really boasts the confidence of the people who need it. thanks for sharing your endless talent...
XoxO,
english-pea-pelter |
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Re: KILL YOU
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by Archie on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:19:12 AM AEST
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| Great poem and good advice. |
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