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Mine For A Day

Contributed by o7neves on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



So let’s pretend, just for a day
You were mine, things went my way
We would wake up early, and go to the gym
Maybe even manage, to get in a swim
I'll cook our brunch, while you jump in the shower
30 minutes later, the food you devour
You wash the dishes, while I take a bath
And you watch “The L Word” and sit & relax
Finally I’m done, so I get myself together
It’s a gorgeous day out, such beautiful weather
So we decided, to spend the day outdoors
The whole time I was ecstatic, cuz I was all yours
It’s about that time, time to eat
So I take you to a restaurant, and lead you to your seat
The food was delicious, it was to die for
But the night’s not over, wait there’s more
We take a walk, down by the airport
To watch the planes, as if it were a sport
We lay there cuddling, in each other’s arms
Everything’s so perfect, until I awake to my damn alarm!




Copyright © o7neves ... [ 2005-03-07 23:58:24]
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Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:28:32 AM AEST
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Very good write.
huggs,
emy


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:34:03 AM AEST
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Don't you just hate that? I walked through your write with you. I have had that kind of dream. Nicely put. Thanks for sharing.


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:14:21 AM AEST
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oh such a beautiful fantasy laced with such a

vivd nuance of romance . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 05:31:17 PM AEST
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that was great tanya! abosuletly wonderful, i know exactly where ur comin from :) don't u hate it when u wake up from something so perfect? about time u pull something out of that head of urs :) great job, im glad i finally got to read something new from u...

Curtis


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by LaDyD on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:47:53 PM AEST
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Finally you put up a new poem =) it was great...u just had to add in "The L Word" lol


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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Man! I wanted it to keep going! That seems like the most perfect day EVER! I hate your alarm! :-)


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by usmc2534 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:50:59 AM AEST
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sounds like my last relationship.......it kinda makes me sad. ....you ever get the feeling that after that one great love you had in your life, no one ever measures up really? don't know, maybe it's just me thinking too much again...............
Fredy


Re: Mine For A Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:30:57 PM AEST
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Sounds like the best day ever! Man alarm clocks suck.

Scott




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