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You wrought the blood
Of your own followers
And tears produced a flood
For the fallen martyrs

You infect delusions of life
By saying you'll take away strife
When you'll do nothing of the kind
And leave happiness to find

In the verses of hatred that you preach
You leave perfection out of their reach
You have so many people that believe
In your lies about faith needed to see

But my blood is what you've taken enough of
With your sick delusions of love
And I've seen enough [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Verses of Blood's Sorrow

Contributed by essentially9 on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:29:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Verses of Blood's Sorrow

You wrought the blood
Of your own followers
And tears produced a flood
For the fallen martyrs

You infect delusions of life
By saying you'll take away strife
When you'll do nothing of the kind
And leave happiness to find

In the verses of hatred that you preach
You leave perfection out of their reach
You have so many people that believe
In your lies about faith needed to see

But my blood is what you've taken enough of
With your sick delusions of love
And I've seen enough

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-07 21:29:13]
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Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:33:06 PM AEST
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Great post Jen....Hmmm.With religion...I feel the same way....Now with you...I wonder what your talking about...great job again...

Clark

Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:06:12 PM AEST
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I am not sure if you were talking about
religion with this, but if you were it was still a
great poem even though I disagree with it. I
loved the title it was just awesome. Keep up
the great writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by coolreengo on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST
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wow. really cool. I'm not very religous so, i'm not sure if its meant to be. Like i said, really cool.

Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by axeman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:33:26 AM AEST
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this is a good poem, and about a topic that i love to write about. keep up the good work.

Re: Verses of Blood's Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:16:51 PM AEST
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Odd how in this write it seems that you have broken free of this power, leader while so many others have not. Are you wrong or are they? An interesting perspective, well done!

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