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but I just held my merry tune
thrown into the sky I died
with needles in my eyes

Like the stars you took away
and left a gaping hole replaced
by pins and needles and sleepy feelings
that just seemed all the same...

I rubbed my face into your neck
Said 'lest I dye before sunrise
You'll be here when I wake?'
But so much like others then
you just looked down and shook my hand
and went away again...

Blinded by your light I cried
'let me come along behind!'
But to my sullen siren song
I heeded no reply...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => PsychoScissors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Of Pins and Sleepy Feelings

Contributed by PsychoScissors on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 08:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You gave me one due warning then
but I just held my merry tune
thrown into the sky I died
with needles in my eyes

Like the stars you took away
and left a gaping hole replaced
by pins and needles and sleepy feelings
that just seemed all the same...

I rubbed my face into your neck
Said 'lest I dye before sunrise
You'll be here when I wake?'
But so much like others then
you just looked down and shook my hand
and went away again...

Blinded by your light I cried
'let me come along behind!'
But to my sullen siren song
I heeded no reply...

Copyright © PsychoScissors ... [ 2005-03-07 20:13:36]
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Re: Of Pins and Sleepy Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:17:15 PM AEST
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That was really cool, very interesting and different. Nice job, I liked it a lot.
I really liked the third stanza, I think it was my favorite, you also ended
it very effectively. Awesome work.

~Waos/Kara

Re: Of Pins and Sleepy Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by KantKureLyfe on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:46:30 PM AEST
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Any person that has ever been in love could relate to this beautiful piece of writting. I for one. We never really know what we have till its gone ... sad isn't it. Ellis ..

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