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To the hymns of the unliberated;
Little did I know the pain they endured
To live through the whispers of the woods.

Love rests on the shades of ignorance
Of deceit and infidelity in its view;
The sweet mortal walked right through
Though but to taste tears of love

I looked on through the slit of ignorance
With my mind tightly bound;
The tears of joy once seen aplenty
Turned not to look back and smile a dime

Oh! Why did not I unlock the threads
That held me so tightly for despair;
The pain that I once tasted to dread
Was there for ever to stay on and on.

I took her slowly in my arms,
With trembling feet and fleeting thoughts;
My love unhindered for her to see
The joy that life once meant to her.

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Tears of Joy

Contributed by podiyan on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I danced to the tunes of neverland
To the hymns of the unliberated;
Little did I know the pain they endured
To live through the whispers of the woods.

Love rests on the shades of ignorance
Of deceit and infidelity in its view;
The sweet mortal walked right through
Though but to taste tears of love

I looked on through the slit of ignorance
With my mind tightly bound;
The tears of joy once seen aplenty
Turned not to look back and smile a dime

Oh! Why did not I unlock the threads
That held me so tightly for despair;
The pain that I once tasted to dread
Was there for ever to stay on and on.

I took her slowly in my arms,
With trembling feet and fleeting thoughts;
My love unhindered for her to see
The joy that life once meant to her.

Copyright © podiyan ... [ 2005-03-06 23:00:13]
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Re: Tears of Joy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:28:21 AM AEST
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Wow...This is so beautifully written. Excellent work. I look forward to reading more from you very soon! :-)

Re: Tears of Joy (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:30:59 PM AEST
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exelent. wonderful. beautiful. i loved it

Re: Tears of Joy (User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:47:16 PM AEST
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What are you talking about inability?
This work is absolutely excellent....
beautyful pace, wonderful images, powerful feelings.....
At least in my oppinion, this is what maes a good poem...
and if this poem shouldn't meet these expectations, then I'm honestly wondering what all the other lot of low-niveau poems are doing on this site...
go on working like this, you've got a gift for it.

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