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Array ( [sid] => 86677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Trust For Me [time] => 2005-03-06 22:44:55 [hometext] => I wrote this one on 11-11-03. It was for my b/f at the time(Will) when he was first locked up. [bodytext] => It hurts me really bad
When you don't have trust for me
And when you said I was sleeping around
Expically with Lee

I honestly thought you trusted me
Well I guess you really don't
And even if you say you will
In the end you wont

Iv always been here for you
Through thick, thicker, and thin
Iv tryed to be perfect for you
But I never seem to win

What is it Will?
Is it just me?
Writing nasty break up letters
How can this be?

You were supost to be my husband
And I was supost to be your wife
I was ready to say "for better or worse"
And ya that does meen life

Now I don't know what the hells going on
Your letter was full of hate
I just pray that things get better
Before it becomes to late

For you are the one in
And I am the one out
So you got to be able to trust me
"One Love" without a doubt!
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Your Trust For Me

Contributed by wetnwild on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It hurts me really bad
When you don't have trust for me
And when you said I was sleeping around
Expically with Lee

I honestly thought you trusted me
Well I guess you really don't
And even if you say you will
In the end you wont

Iv always been here for you
Through thick, thicker, and thin
Iv tryed to be perfect for you
But I never seem to win

What is it Will?
Is it just me?
Writing nasty break up letters
How can this be?

You were supost to be my husband
And I was supost to be your wife
I was ready to say "for better or worse"
And ya that does meen life

Now I don't know what the hells going on
Your letter was full of hate
I just pray that things get better
Before it becomes to late

For you are the one in
And I am the one out
So you got to be able to trust me
"One Love" without a doubt!

Copyright © wetnwild ... [ 2005-03-06 22:44:55]
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Re: Your Trust For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:21:44 AM AEST
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Great poem. The emotions are portrayed nicely. The poem is supported by common known terms. The flow is great. Though, the poem would be better if you correct some spelling errors. Also, you might not want to use contractions, they tend to take away from the poem, and the flow. Other than that this is an amazing poem. I hope things work out for you in the end. Great Write.

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