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When I close my eyes
I'm overcome with want
To make the memories
And wishes come true
And finally relive again

When I close my eyes
The notes of the piano
Fade into misery
Of what will never be
But discord and nothing
That doesn't mean anything

When I open my eyes
I see what is reality
And it is nothing
That I wanted it to be
It's like it was yesterday

And the piano plays
The notes filled with pain
And the measures are the same
With only silence at the end of each refrain

Until the strings are rusted with hate
And I close my eyes for another day [comments] => 8 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Rusted With Hate

Contributed by essentially9 on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 07:40:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Rusted With Hate

When I close my eyes
I'm overcome with want
To make the memories
And wishes come true
And finally relive again

When I close my eyes
The notes of the piano
Fade into misery
Of what will never be
But discord and nothing
That doesn't mean anything

When I open my eyes
I see what is reality
And it is nothing
That I wanted it to be
It's like it was yesterday

And the piano plays
The notes filled with pain
And the measures are the same
With only silence at the end of each refrain

Until the strings are rusted with hate
And I close my eyes for another day

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-06 19:40:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:43:08 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Huggs,
emy

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:02:03 PM AEST
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So much emotion in this wonderful piece. I love it.

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Nobrainer on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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great job!!

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:26:47 PM AEST
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VERY beautiful..Jen...wow....Great job...always seem to amaze me...=]

Clark

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:36:24 PM AEST
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very sad and emotional piece .
well done.

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:38:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem loved it all... don't know what
else to say besides that.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:57:42 PM AEST
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This piece just seems to drip with despair and futility, yet maybe its the optamist in me but somehow in the first stanza buried under all that want, do I detect the faintest echo of hope?

Re: Rusted With Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:51:28 PM AEST
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the burning confusion we exsist in
can be overwhelming at times.
such beautiful saddnessWell Done.

The Wind

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