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Made me a marroon masochist
Whose to blame?
Finagle is how he got me,
Fickle is what we play
A passion for the chase,
He cant help but push me away Allowing me to drift off
'Til I spot,
a better place at that very moment
He calls out for help
Screaming my name
Few simple words, he had me at name
Together enchanted we go back
to the beginning of our addicting game, Where we'll start over to end the very same way
I'm not ashamed and I will not change
No matter what people will say Because Yes, Plenty had and will say I'm crazy..
No, though I am highly unstable
It's better to say that
I'm a mere hint of pyscho
and I know:
Many laugh and call me a tonta that's sprung , And what??
So I might be a tonta,
But I found me My LOVE
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Fickle

Contributed by badmellifluous_G on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 07:28:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Made me a marroon masochist
Whose to blame?
Finagle is how he got me,
Fickle is what we play
A passion for the chase,
He cant help but push me away Allowing me to drift off
'Til I spot,
a better place at that very moment
He calls out for help
Screaming my name
Few simple words, he had me at name
Together enchanted we go back
to the beginning of our addicting game, Where we'll start over to end the very same way
I'm not ashamed and I will not change
No matter what people will say Because Yes, Plenty had and will say I'm crazy..
No, though I am highly unstable
It's better to say that
I'm a mere hint of pyscho
and I know:
Many laugh and call me a tonta that's sprung , And what??
So I might be a tonta,
But I found me My LOVE

Copyright Â© badmellifluous_G ... [ 2005-03-06 19:28:54]
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Re: Fickle (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:13:55 AM AEST
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its an awesome write, well done, cant wait to read more from you :)
Caiti XoXo

Re: Fickle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:38:15 PM AEST
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Wow! thats all i have to say! great poem..i would love to see you keep writing.

Re: Fickle (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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Ooo good poem! Welcome to YPDC! And yes, it's right. Any poem is right! Nice job, Keep it up!
-Drapes

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