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Array ( [sid] => 86644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dungeon Of My Mind [time] => 2005-03-06 13:05:25 [hometext] => I will rot down here.. [bodytext] => I live in the dungeon of my mind,
A place where others can not find,
Its dark, a place where angels fear to tred,
I live alone down here on my death bed.

I lay chained never able to escape,
Can’t live through another rape,
The pain is soul destroying,
With my unstable mind you are toying.

I have never felt anything like this,
I have been cursed with the reapers kiss,
I can feel his touch all over me,
I gave into him now I’ll never be free.

It eats & keeps me locked away down here,
With only demons to witness my tears,
They dance around inside my damaged brain,
For years they have been driving me insane.

Naked & beaten I lay,
To be allowed to live I pray,
But my prayers don’t deserve an answer,
As my depression is my mind cancer

[comments] => 10 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dungeon Of My Mind

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I live in the dungeon of my mind,
A place where others can not find,
Its dark, a place where angels fear to tred,
I live alone down here on my death bed.

I lay chained never able to escape,
Can’t live through another rape,
The pain is soul destroying,
With my unstable mind you are toying.

I have never felt anything like this,
I have been cursed with the reapers kiss,
I can feel his touch all over me,
I gave into him now I’ll never be free.

It eats & keeps me locked away down here,
With only demons to witness my tears,
They dance around inside my damaged brain,
For years they have been driving me insane.

Naked & beaten I lay,
To be allowed to live I pray,
But my prayers don’t deserve an answer,
As my depression is my mind cancer

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-03-06 13:05:25]
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Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:11:24 PM AEST
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beautiful...i was going to quote a fave line, but there are too many...great use of words, good forum, nice rhyming...wonderful write...

Auryn

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:12:18 PM AEST
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very good !! 2 thumbs up ! and if i had aniother one id give 3 .. sometimes i feel like im in a dungeon of my mind too .. keep writing !

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:23:47 PM AEST
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dark...yet not senselessly gore....well written..

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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i like this poem and it's revealing nature of

inner turmoil, an artistic writting of a poets

inner struggle, i can relate 2 this situation,

very nice peice of writting pix . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:15:05 PM AEST
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Whoa!!! that was just simply amazing Krissie, gosh hmmmm..... I certainly know how that one feels.

Huggies
Jane

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:55:40 PM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry, Pix.
You have the reader feeling the writers inner turmoil. The mind is a dangerous thing sometimes. A truly great write.

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:57:10 PM AEST
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Wow, Pixie...you sure took me along with you with this write.. Awesome write..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:24:42 PM AEST
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wow pixie girl this is very deep.
well done.

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 08:42:30 AM AEST
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great work again pix! hope you won your quiz!

Johnny.

Re: Dungeon Of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:57:13 AM AEST
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Powerful emotional write Pixie. Sorry this happened to you scum of the earth who ever did this to u.

Love and hugs sent to you

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

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