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I’ll push you around
I’ll kick you away
Spit on your face
And then walk away

What you going to do ?
Yell at me to stop ?
I’m the one in charge
And with one blow I’ll make you drop

I’ll whisper in your ear
“Come on, make a move
Hit me why don’t you ?
I have nothing more to prove”

You cower in fear
In my presence
You can’t leave me
I have to teach lessons

This is what you get
For making me look bad
I’ll hang the person you love the most
Your dad

You see
It doesn’t matter what I do now
Hell is opening its gates for me
And to the master I shall bow

Come on
I’m waiting
Waiting for your pain
To kill I’m debating

I’ll let you feel
The power in me
The fear in your eyes
That’s all I have to see.

So what are you waiting for ?


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What You Waiting For ?

Contributed by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



What You Waiting For ??

I’ll push you around
I’ll kick you away
Spit on your face
And then walk away

What you going to do ?
Yell at me to stop ?
I’m the one in charge
And with one blow I’ll make you drop

I’ll whisper in your ear
“Come on, make a move
Hit me why don’t you ?
I have nothing more to prove”

You cower in fear
In my presence
You can’t leave me
I have to teach lessons

This is what you get
For making me look bad
I’ll hang the person you love the most
Your dad

You see
It doesn’t matter what I do now
Hell is opening its gates for me
And to the master I shall bow

Come on
I’m waiting
Waiting for your pain
To kill I’m debating

I’ll let you feel
The power in me
The fear in your eyes
That’s all I have to see.

So what are you waiting for ?






Copyright © Xxluckie_lynnxX ... [ 2005-03-06 12:24:54]
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Re: What You Waiting For ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:21:07 PM AEST
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'Come on
I'm waiting
Waiting for your pain'


nice job...good forum, nice rhyming...i like the way you wrote it...

Auryn


Re: What You Waiting For ? (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:12:45 PM AEST
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ouch ...way to let the anger out!

;)


Re: What You Waiting For ? (User Rating: 1 )
by XOashleyreneXO on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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i love your poem. its a pretty good one....i know what this person is waiting for....but they're not waiting anymore...so i've heard. i can really put this poem into a situation that you're having right now...
-me


Re: What You Waiting For ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Mallard8 on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:08:07 AM AEST
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Kinda scary, but super dope! I hope that you had fun writing it and it sounds like you poured your heart and soul into it... cause if you didn't your in jail for 10 to 15 years....ahah

Peace

Sc




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