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Array ( [sid] => 86604 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonley Again [time] => 2005-03-06 00:59:21 [hometext] => I was totaly angry when I wrote this. This had a lot of cuss words in it. So I edited them out for this site. I hope they are all out. [bodytext] =>
It all came down to this last move tonight

But I am afraid that the cards delt just weren't right

Who is to blame I don't know anymore

But I know my heart is bleeding all over the floor

As I walk to the bedroom and shut the door

You don't even look in the direction of the trail it leaves behind

How could you be so cruel and act so blind

On the surgeons table as he trys to meand my wounds

Afraid to come home to have you avoid me with seperate rooms

The voices inside make me scream on the outside

As you tell me I am how much I mean to you for what thats worth

You just throw another rock through my broken window and make it worse

So get away from me now and forever to eternity

So go away yesterday tomarrow and the day after the last day in january

I'm tired of keepin my cool

So now the anger is bustin out like kids on the last day of school

It's time to go down in the books for this one

Because you use to be all of my world

But no longer are the footsteps beside one another

The rain has washed them away and now I wait for better weather

Someday the sun will shine again on my side of the street

Until then I am going stand above you until I land on my feet
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Keeraku [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Lonley Again

Contributed by Keeraku on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:59:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




It all came down to this last move tonight

But I am afraid that the cards delt just weren't right

Who is to blame I don't know anymore

But I know my heart is bleeding all over the floor

As I walk to the bedroom and shut the door

You don't even look in the direction of the trail it leaves behind

How could you be so cruel and act so blind

On the surgeons table as he trys to meand my wounds

Afraid to come home to have you avoid me with seperate rooms

The voices inside make me scream on the outside

As you tell me I am how much I mean to you for what thats worth

You just throw another rock through my broken window and make it worse

So get away from me now and forever to eternity

So go away yesterday tomarrow and the day after the last day in january

I'm tired of keepin my cool

So now the anger is bustin out like kids on the last day of school

It's time to go down in the books for this one

Because you use to be all of my world

But no longer are the footsteps beside one another

The rain has washed them away and now I wait for better weather

Someday the sun will shine again on my side of the street

Until then I am going stand above you until I land on my feet




Copyright © Keeraku ... [ 2005-03-06 00:59:21]
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Re: Lonley Again (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:13:30 AM AEST
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i really like your style of writing. i think its unique
i like the way you use analogies to express yourself, i believe its much more effective in describing your mood to readers.

awesome poem. i feel the emotion here.


Re: Lonley Again (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:49:33 AM AEST
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Touching in all sense. Anger could turn to hate. It's life you know. The anger thing. You will arise from this on your feet. Planted and confident; a lesson learned. Good write.


Re: Lonley Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:47:24 PM AEST
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Gut wrenching....awesome write




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