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Array ( [sid] => 86600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet bloody knife [time] => 2005-03-06 00:11:14 [hometext] => writen on 3*4*05...oh and yes I know I'm a creepy freak! lol! [bodytext] => Precious little girl,
I watch your graceful movements.
As you walk,
As you talk
I am there.

You cannot see me,
But you can hear me,
Whisper inside your head.

As you lay and sleep at night
Let me be there by your side.

To tie you up and gag you
To run my cold blade,
over your naked body.

And watch you cry
When I slowly cut your skin away.

Child, can't you even see,
How happy you make me?

Your blood,
warm and welcoming
With a sweet taste of honey.

I brace your cheek
Cold to the touch.
Your eyes bright with fear.

Rest Dear,
The pain will all be over soon.

As you take your last breath,
I wait,
Quietly
Still by your side.

Tastefully I lay a crown of roses,
Atop your head
For you will need one
Where you are going.

My sweet dead angel,
All covered in blood
Come and sit awhile with me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cherryteasecake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sweet bloody knife

Contributed by Cherryteasecake on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:11:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Precious little girl,
I watch your graceful movements.
As you walk,
As you talk
I am there.

You cannot see me,
But you can hear me,
Whisper inside your head.

As you lay and sleep at night
Let me be there by your side.

To tie you up and gag you
To run my cold blade,
over your naked body.

And watch you cry
When I slowly cut your skin away.

Child, can't you even see,
How happy you make me?

Your blood,
warm and welcoming
With a sweet taste of honey.

I brace your cheek
Cold to the touch.
Your eyes bright with fear.

Rest Dear,
The pain will all be over soon.

As you take your last breath,
I wait,
Quietly
Still by your side.

Tastefully I lay a crown of roses,
Atop your head
For you will need one
Where you are going.

My sweet dead angel,
All covered in blood
Come and sit awhile with me.

Copyright © Cherryteasecake ... [ 2005-03-06 00:11:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sweet bloody knife (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:43:06 PM AEST
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great write...love how the whole thing went...some great lines in this...keep it up...

Auryn

Re: Sweet bloody knife (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:28:43 AM AEST
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just a little creepy, but good write...

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