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Array ( [sid] => 86598 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To You [time] => 2005-03-06 00:02:52 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote when me and my first love broke up. [bodytext] =>
~~ >>------- To You -----> ~~


The darkness inside isn't getting any brighter

The load on my shoulders isn't getting any lighter

Just when I think that it's going to shine

A dark cloud forms over head and rains on this hope of mine

I cannot and will not take this pain anymore

Because it is eating me away straight to the core

It's on my last nerve should I sever it now?

You say it will be ok but I ask you how?

I do not see this end of the road of pain carriers

All I see is a road block with barriers

How am I supposed to get by this?

When it seems like just yesterday you said goodbye with a kiss?

I will never understand the pain you gave me so hurtful indeed

Or how our love could go so far yet only seem to travel ten feet

So to you I ask this simple question once more

Why must we go on..for it was YOU that shut the door

So now I am done with you cause of the wrong way you are stearing

And wonder what in this life you are truly fearing

Because no one on this earth is as crazy as you

Although I'm gettin pretty close to tell ya the truth

So in closing with words to you that bring much thought

Just sit back and think of how much pain you really brought
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Keeraku [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
To You

Contributed by Keeraku on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




~~ >>------- To You -----> ~~


The darkness inside isn't getting any brighter

The load on my shoulders isn't getting any lighter

Just when I think that it's going to shine

A dark cloud forms over head and rains on this hope of mine

I cannot and will not take this pain anymore

Because it is eating me away straight to the core

It's on my last nerve should I sever it now?

You say it will be ok but I ask you how?

I do not see this end of the road of pain carriers

All I see is a road block with barriers

How am I supposed to get by this?

When it seems like just yesterday you said goodbye with a kiss?

I will never understand the pain you gave me so hurtful indeed

Or how our love could go so far yet only seem to travel ten feet

So to you I ask this simple question once more

Why must we go on..for it was YOU that shut the door

So now I am done with you cause of the wrong way you are stearing

And wonder what in this life you are truly fearing

Because no one on this earth is as crazy as you

Although I'm gettin pretty close to tell ya the truth

So in closing with words to you that bring much thought

Just sit back and think of how much pain you really brought




Copyright © Keeraku ... [ 2005-03-06 00:02:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: To You (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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this is really good. I hate how most relationships have to end by someone getting hurt.
Well i hope u have moved on.
Good write!


Re: To You (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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amazing ...the way uve expressed pain...hope the worst is over




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