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Array ( [sid] => 86560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Corrupted Stains [time] => 2005-03-05 20:16:20 [hometext] => * I wrote this awhile ago, but never posted it. If you are in need of your daily fill of darkness and gore then read this. * [bodytext] =>
Drive the knife into that weakened spine
Stab again and again
Until you drown in the spray
And lie exhausted in the pummeled remains
Your hand lying on the warm liver
And watching as the stain spreads in the snow
Sever the neck that still gasps for air
And kiss the dead lips
Flecked with blood and gore
Moan as you lick the cold flesh
Hold the remains in your stained arms
And feel as the coldness of death
Replaces the warmth of life
Reflect on the life that you deleted
And sew the lips shut
That once abused you
Hold the knife that will convict you
Draw words on the frozen remains
As the snow swirls around you
And the sirens steal your senses [comments] => 7 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Corrupted Stains

Contributed by bobotheclown on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:16:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Drive the knife into that weakened spine
Stab again and again
Until you drown in the spray
And lie exhausted in the pummeled remains
Your hand lying on the warm liver
And watching as the stain spreads in the snow
Sever the neck that still gasps for air
And kiss the dead lips
Flecked with blood and gore
Moan as you lick the cold flesh
Hold the remains in your stained arms
And feel as the coldness of death
Replaces the warmth of life
Reflect on the life that you deleted
And sew the lips shut
That once abused you
Hold the knife that will convict you
Draw words on the frozen remains
As the snow swirls around you
And the sirens steal your senses

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2005-03-05 20:16:20]
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Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:02:32 PM AEST
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its good to know that its not just me that gets sudden bouts of murderous rage. or mayb not so sudden. but still, feels like gettin really dark sometimes...

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by moriahk on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:13:42 PM AEST
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WOW! this is an incredible poem! i have feelings like this all the time! i just can't put into so many words!

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:27:24 AM AEST
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Wow!!! that was just dark and vivid throughout. Great imagery Joel im very happy to have seen this.

Good poem as always...

Janey *_*

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:18:50 PM AEST
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dark and great usage of words, brilliant :)
pix xx

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:32:37 PM AEST
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wow you have a awsome way of discribing your rage.I felt like that sometimes.
awsome write.

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:31:44 PM AEST
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::raised eyebrow:: ::bows to the master of darkness:: i think this filled my prescription for a few weeks at least....

Re: Corrupted Stains (User Rating: 1 )
by Rottenrioter on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:00:41 PM AEST
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I really like this one good write keep up the good work

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