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my love is for you
your Sapphire eyes
makes me sigh
Your soft and gentle
Your smile is warm
you've cared for me
since you were born
someday you'll fly away
but till that day
I'll love you so
then I'll watch you go
melt into the sky
when you fly so high
Wings of blue
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Wings of Blue

Contributed by PoetBaby814 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:40:54 PM in AEST
Topic: PetPoems

Wings of blue
my love is for you
your Sapphire eyes
makes me sigh
Your soft and gentle
Your smile is warm
you've cared for me
since you were born
someday you'll fly away
but till that day
I'll love you so
then I'll watch you go
melt into the sky
when you fly so high
Wings of blue
I'll always love you

Copyright © PoetBaby814 ... [ 2005-03-05 19:40:54]
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Re: Wings of Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 04:38:35 PM AEST
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this reminded me of Kips poem from Napoleon Dynamite. I am not one for rhyming, but this was pretty good, for a rhyming poem. anyway, keep up the good work.

Re: Wings of Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:13:36 PM AEST
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This was a good poem. The only part that is weird is this...

Your soft and gentle
Your smile is warm
you've cared for me
since you were born

You were doing couplet rhymes until the middle and then switched. It would have been better if you were to have kept to the rhyming couplets. But all around it was a great poem...
Jodi

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