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Array ( [sid] => 86547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take Me Away From My Two Most Lonliest Days [time] => 2005-03-05 19:27:36 [hometext] => The lonliest two days of my life. :( ((and no I don't mean and sleep peacefully forever as in kill me just so everyone knows)) [bodytext] => Image hosted by Photobucket.com
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As I sit there, covered in misery, drowning in tears..
I feel an urge to fall.
To let go of my energy, and let me lay there on the ground, silent.
Inside myself I'm whining.
Inside myself I'm hiding.
Nothing but emotion.
Nothing but sighs flying through my head.
I just wish someone would take me away, take me away on my two most lonliest days.
I have no one to hang out with, no one to laugh with.
And because I'm so lonely, I sleep, I sit there in my room.
I swerve throughout myself.
I'm deeply in my thoughts, opposing to cries.

Just take me away from my two most lonliest days.
The days I urge to break down.
The days I urge to not make a sound.
No one cares.
No one's around.
No one's asleep.
They're off without me, with other people.
I can't stop it.
I feel lonley, I feel sad.
I cried eight times within two days.
My face felt like it was burning from my dry skin.
I have all this stress, all these worries.
I want to fade away into a black rose, and sleep peacefully forever..
Just as long as I'm away from this pain.
Take me away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 63 [informant] => xFaLLeNxFaRiex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
Take Me Away From My Two Most Lonliest Days

Contributed by xFaLLeNxFaRiex on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:27:36 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



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As I sit there, covered in misery, drowning in tears..
I feel an urge to fall.
To let go of my energy, and let me lay there on the ground, silent.
Inside myself I'm whining.
Inside myself I'm hiding.
Nothing but emotion.
Nothing but sighs flying through my head.
I just wish someone would take me away, take me away on my two most lonliest days.
I have no one to hang out with, no one to laugh with.
And because I'm so lonely, I sleep, I sit there in my room.
I swerve throughout myself.
I'm deeply in my thoughts, opposing to cries.

Just take me away from my two most lonliest days.
The days I urge to break down.
The days I urge to not make a sound.
No one cares.
No one's around.
No one's asleep.
They're off without me, with other people.
I can't stop it.
I feel lonley, I feel sad.
I cried eight times within two days.
My face felt like it was burning from my dry skin.
I have all this stress, all these worries.
I want to fade away into a black rose, and sleep peacefully forever..
Just as long as I'm away from this pain.
Take me away.




Copyright © xFaLLeNxFaRiex ... [ 2005-03-05 19:27:36]
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Re: Take Me Away From My Two Most Lonliest Days (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:08:33 PM AEST
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That was very beautiful and well written. Teh weird thing is, I'm feeling exactly the same way... It will be alright. We will not be alone forever. The only reason we are alone now is because no one right now is good enough. Just wait! ;-)


Re: Take Me Away From My Two Most Lonliest Days (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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First off... I am in love with Amy Lee and the band Evanescence... abolutely in love with her (hints my name... lol). She is who I turn to for good music writing, a great voice, a person with great self respect and all around great talent. In this poem... you show great talent as well. Much of my life is spent feeling the way you express in your poem. It is hard and I am trying to fight it all off. I hope that you can find the strength to be able to fight it off and be happy. Keep writing because this is really good. Great write...
Jodi




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