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Array ( [sid] => 86491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That was'nt my dream Girl: : : But love eternal [time] => 2005-03-05 00:32:07 [hometext] => Love is Blind [bodytext] => A strange chemistry evolves
As you face, your thought in my mind revolves

You are not empyrean nor a fairy
Now You are my love life's eternal endeary

Used to avoid you,
Lookin for a damsel delirous
Plunging the passions tides
But that passion, never swayed love's delights

Never thought you be my love
But atlast am bitten

Bitten by your mesmerizing eyes
Your thoughts forcing a lonely cries.

You are not my dream girl
But now my dreams evolves
You and your vivid thoughts involves

Its you
sets souls pulsating serene and tranquility
Noone else might beared a weathered rock
But thats you
soften a rock, Am still shocked

Without you
My life a shallow totally hollow
Destined your love, perfect path followed



Looking for your comments [comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 21 [informant] => naveen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
That was'nt my dream Girl: : : But love eternal

Contributed by naveen on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 12:32:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



A strange chemistry evolves
As you face, your thought in my mind revolves

You are not empyrean nor a fairy
Now You are my love life's eternal endeary

Used to avoid you,
Lookin for a damsel delirous
Plunging the passions tides
But that passion, never swayed love's delights

Never thought you be my love
But atlast am bitten

Bitten by your mesmerizing eyes
Your thoughts forcing a lonely cries.

You are not my dream girl
But now my dreams evolves
You and your vivid thoughts involves

Its you
sets souls pulsating serene and tranquility
Noone else might beared a weathered rock
But thats you
soften a rock, Am still shocked

Without you
My life a shallow totally hollow
Destined your love, perfect path followed



Looking for your comments



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Re: That was'nt my dream Girl: : : But love eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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naveen ,,,,,,,,,,i think u have mind my words isn't it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,u should know the diamond formed under pressure..........whatever

great poem ,,keep trying bring more emotions
it was great
keep sharing

ya one thing more have u ever fall in love
make a p.m




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