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Array ( [sid] => 86468 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Broke My Promise.. [time] => 2005-03-04 19:53:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cant help but cry
Every tear that I do
I cant help but still
Be in love with you
I cant seem to find
Any answer that I need
I cant seem to find
The peace that I seek
And my only escape
Is the one that Im not sure of
You're the only thing holding me here
Youre the one that I love
And the knife isnt so lonely
Cause I befriended it again
Im confiding in it
Like I once did
You made me promise that I
Wouldn't cut again
I broke my promise
I hope you'll forgive me again
Its so hard in this world, though
You just don't get it
You'll know my pain
And I'll never admit it
Cause if you saw the real me
Youd be gone in a heartbeat
So Ill just stay in my corner, hands around my knees
Rockin back an forth in my seat [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I Broke My Promise..

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:53:17 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I cant help but cry
Every tear that I do
I cant help but still
Be in love with you
I cant seem to find
Any answer that I need
I cant seem to find
The peace that I seek
And my only escape
Is the one that Im not sure of
You're the only thing holding me here
Youre the one that I love
And the knife isnt so lonely
Cause I befriended it again
Im confiding in it
Like I once did
You made me promise that I
Wouldn't cut again
I broke my promise
I hope you'll forgive me again
Its so hard in this world, though
You just don't get it
You'll know my pain
And I'll never admit it
Cause if you saw the real me
Youd be gone in a heartbeat
So Ill just stay in my corner, hands around my knees
Rockin back an forth in my seat

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-03-04 19:53:17]
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Re: I Broke My Promise.. (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 04:58:25 PM AEST
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VERY DEEP , I LIKED IT.

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