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Array ( [sid] => 86449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CONVERTED [time] => 2005-03-04 15:44:28 [hometext] => THIS IS A POEM ABOUT MY BATTLES FROM WITHIN. I WONT GO INTO DETAIL, BUT I'M SURE YOUR GONNA LIKE THIS. PLEASE COMMENT AFTERWORDS. [bodytext] => TWENTY-ONE YEARS I FOUGHT FOR THE DEVIL
TO UNDERSTAND
YOU MUST BE HUMBLE
CAUSE I'M ABOUT TO TAKE YOU ON ANOTHER LEVEL
THOUGHTS STARTED REACCURRING WHEN I LAID IN MY BED
I COULDN'T AVOID THE WHISPERS THAT FLOWED THROUGH MY HEAD
AMOUNGST MY DREAMS
I DIDN'T TAKE PART IN WHAT THEY WOULD DO
BE LUCKY YOU WEREN'T ME
CAUSE THESE THINGS WERE UGLY TOO
SOME HAD WINGS
OTHER HAD HORNS
IT WAS ALMOST AS CREEPY AS WATCHING
"CHILDERN OF THE CORN"
IN THIS WORLD THEY TAKE OUR FORM
THEY HAVE EXISTED LONG BEFORE I WAS EVEN BORN
THEIR ONLY GOAL IS TO CURRUPT EVERYBODIES SOUL
THE ONES THEY CATCH
HAVE A DESTAINED PLACE TO GO
WHY IS IT PEOPLE BELIEVE IN ANGELS BUT NOT THE OTHER SIDE?
I CALL THAT INGORENACE OF THE BELIEFS
CAUSE EVEN IN DARKNESS
THERE ARE RULES TO ADBIDE BY
THEY CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD WHEN I WAS ALONE
IT ONLY TOOK DAYS BEFORE THEY CONTROLED WHAT I ONCE CALLED MY HOME
MY APPEARANCES STARTED TO CHANGE
FRIENDS BEGAN TO REARRANGE
MY MIND FINALLY STARTED TO SHIFT
AND I WAS NEVER CONSIDERED TO BE THE SAME
THE FEELINGS OF LOVE
SLOWLY BEGAN TO DIE
I STARTED TO COVERING UP MY PROBLEMS
WITH A BUNDLE OF LIES
I WOULD LOOK IN THE MIRROR
BUT I DIDN'T RECONIZGE MY OWN FACE
CAUSE THE DEMON WITHIN ME BEGAN TO SHOW ITS FACE
I STARTED TO CRY
CAUSE I WANTED A WAY OUT
THINGS GOT WORSE FOR ME
TRUST ME
I KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT
FOUR YEARS LATER I GOT IN TOUCH WITH MY CREATER
HE TAUGHT ME ABOUT THE TRUTH OF LIFE
AND WHY I SHOULDN'T BE A HATER
THE BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL HAS ALREADY BEEN WON
GOD GAVE US A FREE WILL
TO DECIDE WHOSE SIDE
WE WOULD BE ON [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 31 [informant] => THUGGIN4REAL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
CONVERTED

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



TWENTY-ONE YEARS I FOUGHT FOR THE DEVIL
TO UNDERSTAND
YOU MUST BE HUMBLE
CAUSE I'M ABOUT TO TAKE YOU ON ANOTHER LEVEL
THOUGHTS STARTED REACCURRING WHEN I LAID IN MY BED
I COULDN'T AVOID THE WHISPERS THAT FLOWED THROUGH MY HEAD
AMOUNGST MY DREAMS
I DIDN'T TAKE PART IN WHAT THEY WOULD DO
BE LUCKY YOU WEREN'T ME
CAUSE THESE THINGS WERE UGLY TOO
SOME HAD WINGS
OTHER HAD HORNS
IT WAS ALMOST AS CREEPY AS WATCHING
"CHILDERN OF THE CORN"
IN THIS WORLD THEY TAKE OUR FORM
THEY HAVE EXISTED LONG BEFORE I WAS EVEN BORN
THEIR ONLY GOAL IS TO CURRUPT EVERYBODIES SOUL
THE ONES THEY CATCH
HAVE A DESTAINED PLACE TO GO
WHY IS IT PEOPLE BELIEVE IN ANGELS BUT NOT THE OTHER SIDE?
I CALL THAT INGORENACE OF THE BELIEFS
CAUSE EVEN IN DARKNESS
THERE ARE RULES TO ADBIDE BY
THEY CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD WHEN I WAS ALONE
IT ONLY TOOK DAYS BEFORE THEY CONTROLED WHAT I ONCE CALLED MY HOME
MY APPEARANCES STARTED TO CHANGE
FRIENDS BEGAN TO REARRANGE
MY MIND FINALLY STARTED TO SHIFT
AND I WAS NEVER CONSIDERED TO BE THE SAME
THE FEELINGS OF LOVE
SLOWLY BEGAN TO DIE
I STARTED TO COVERING UP MY PROBLEMS
WITH A BUNDLE OF LIES
I WOULD LOOK IN THE MIRROR
BUT I DIDN'T RECONIZGE MY OWN FACE
CAUSE THE DEMON WITHIN ME BEGAN TO SHOW ITS FACE
I STARTED TO CRY
CAUSE I WANTED A WAY OUT
THINGS GOT WORSE FOR ME
TRUST ME
I KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT
FOUR YEARS LATER I GOT IN TOUCH WITH MY CREATER
HE TAUGHT ME ABOUT THE TRUTH OF LIFE
AND WHY I SHOULDN'T BE A HATER
THE BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL HAS ALREADY BEEN WON
GOD GAVE US A FREE WILL
TO DECIDE WHOSE SIDE
WE WOULD BE ON




Copyright © THUGGIN4REAL ... [ 2005-03-04 15:44:28]
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Re: CONVERTED (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:17:55 PM AEST
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A strong powerful write. You can feel your pain with the way you express yourself in your poem. It's a hard emotional roller coaster ride our life.
You're right I do quite like your work. A well written piece.


Re: CONVERTED (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:55:33 AM AEST
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Friend

Very Catholic in your thought.The struggle within temptations about. Self and worth a lot of doubt. Where to go.A higher Being. Bless you friend. You follow the right thing. Good write. I have to comment on others now.There are so many writers that deserve time too.I will definately get back to you.You have much to offer please keep posting.
Your friend
Sinned




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