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And from my flame lit cell.
It is your heavenly well, that I smell.
I shall rise before your eyes,
Then take your pitiful life.

Do not fear me,
For I am your ecstasy.
I will take your life higher,
And give you a heart of fire.

Together we shall hide in the shadows,
Together we shall clear the gallows.
You and I in the creating of crimson showers.
Will lift these souls in the darkened hours.

From the depths of hell,
And from my flame lit cell.
It is your heavenly well that I smell.
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Heavenly Well

Contributed by Rylo on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:57:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

From the depths of hell,
And from my flame lit cell.
It is your heavenly well, that I smell.
I shall rise before your eyes,
Then take your pitiful life.

Do not fear me,
For I am your ecstasy.
I will take your life higher,
And give you a heart of fire.

Together we shall hide in the shadows,
Together we shall clear the gallows.
You and I in the creating of crimson showers.
Will lift these souls in the darkened hours.

From the depths of hell,
And from my flame lit cell.
It is your heavenly well that I smell.

Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2005-03-04 01:57:46]
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Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:02:15 AM AEST
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wow i say you are like the best dark and vampire writer beside kindredblood or was his name Karl?
anyways you do dark so well.

Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:04:06 AM AEST
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Thank you, I have been compared to so many people as far as Anne Rice herself. To be honest I never know what to say to something like that. Except thank you very much. I am glad you liked this one.

Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:57:44 AM AEST
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i like it... i can't really compare u to anyone lol... its good

Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:28:46 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I can say I've never read anything like this. Great work!

Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:04:56 PM AEST
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I am not really into dark writes, but I liked this one...
Thank you
Jenni

Re: Heavenly Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:42:26 PM AEST
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excellent poem. i always like it when a poem ties back to the beginning like you just have done. i sometimes try to incorporate into my writing, but i just seem to go from one point to an entirely different subject by the end of the poem. i liked this one very much indeed. so when do i get my heart of fire? =]

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