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Array ( [sid] => 86413 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal Prison [time] => 2005-03-04 01:56:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My skin is cold,
And my cage is made of flames.
I live my life,
With my head hung in shame.

I can hear the wolves howl in the distance,
As evil lurks with persistence.
My hunger grows rapidly,
With every sound of a heartbeat.

The scent of blood is all around,
As I make my way to the surface ground.
With my eyes locked onto my prey,
I can already feel her life slipping away.

I evanescence into the air,
And stand before her.
Running my fingers through her hair,
My white marbled fangs,
Turn to a crimson red, as they begin to tear.

Her soul she has lost,
And an eternal prison was the cost.
Together we shall be,
Now and for all eternity.

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Eternal Prison

Contributed by Rylo on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:56:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My skin is cold,
And my cage is made of flames.
I live my life,
With my head hung in shame.

I can hear the wolves howl in the distance,
As evil lurks with persistence.
My hunger grows rapidly,
With every sound of a heartbeat.

The scent of blood is all around,
As I make my way to the surface ground.
With my eyes locked onto my prey,
I can already feel her life slipping away.

I evanescence into the air,
And stand before her.
Running my fingers through her hair,
My white marbled fangs,
Turn to a crimson red, as they begin to tear.

Her soul she has lost,
And an eternal prison was the cost.
Together we shall be,
Now and for all eternity.

Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2005-03-04 01:56:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Eternal Prison (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:59:55 AM AEST
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wow beautifull.
bravo
you know you just have yourself a new fan .
this is awsome.

Re: Eternal Prison (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:01:31 AM AEST
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Thank you very much, and you yourself has a new fan as well. I am glad you enjoyed the read.

Re: Eternal Prison (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 02:24:03 PM AEST
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Katy (Kqueen) pointed me your direction ... I don't know how I missed ya, must just be a timing thing ... I really like what I just read though and am off to investigate further.

Nazmythian ~
( who really likes what he just read )

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