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Maybe two
Sometimes three
Doesn't matter to me
I will eat less and less
Then maybe you will see
Pain is starving me

The tears I cry burn with every touch
Sometimes it can be too much
I see the hate of me in your eyes
Makes my heart rip inside
Blood vessels are bursting
Bones are breaking
Stomach aching
This is truly a rude awakening

My emotions are getting stronger
What am I to do
Rip my heart out so I will die
But then all you will do is cry
How do I leave without leaving pain behind
The pain inside of me you never knew I felt

Your words screech in my ears
I'm blinded by your depise of me
Muted by your cruel intentions
You'll never see my pain
The pain I hide

When I lie you do not know
The starving of my soul
Skip some meals
Cry my tears
I have faced my biggest fear

The fear of being hated by someone who's supposed to love you

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The Starving Of My Soul

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:35:45 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I skip a meal
Maybe two
Sometimes three
Doesn't matter to me
I will eat less and less
Then maybe you will see
Pain is starving me

The tears I cry burn with every touch
Sometimes it can be too much
I see the hate of me in your eyes
Makes my heart rip inside
Blood vessels are bursting
Bones are breaking
Stomach aching
This is truly a rude awakening

My emotions are getting stronger
What am I to do
Rip my heart out so I will die
But then all you will do is cry
How do I leave without leaving pain behind
The pain inside of me you never knew I felt

Your words screech in my ears
I'm blinded by your depise of me
Muted by your cruel intentions
You'll never see my pain
The pain I hide

When I lie you do not know
The starving of my soul
Skip some meals
Cry my tears
I have faced my biggest fear

The fear of being hated by someone who's supposed to love you

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-03-04 01:35:45]
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:40:38 AM AEST
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So sad but written well.
Ur a very good person for not letting her see your pain but someone needs to help u if your Mom want.
Keep writting.
Huggs, luv, prayers,
emy

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:32:04 AM AEST
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awesome, well done

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:37:22 AM AEST
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Amy this was emotionaly sad and heartbreaking... You really have outdone yourself with this. im so proud of you...

Jane @)->---

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by lostlady38 on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:36:51 PM AEST
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whoa!!!! i can't believe someone else feels this way.i've been there.i went around for years trying to figure out why my dad didn't love me. if this is a situation with one of your parents please change things before it's too late. if this is with someone else then the best you can do is get out. you definitely have a firm grip on reality.love this one. will read more.

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:04:43 PM AEST
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Amy, such a sad poem. i only hope that it is words upon paper and that you really do not starve yourself! A good write and keep posting!

Carol

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:38:46 PM AEST
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*waves from across the room* Hi!
This poem truely blew me away hunnie I'm really proud you. You have the words and feelings to share with other's n they can re late from time to time. I'm so super proud of you precious -huggles tight- keep em coming..

Care

Re: The Starving Of My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:47:00 PM AEST
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some mothers...::sigh:: amy, this is your best one that i have seen so far. the emotion and the words probably had something to do with me liking it so much =]

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