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Array ( [sid] => 86396 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what i'm able to do [time] => 2005-03-03 22:00:29 [hometext] => sometimes we go even beyond our own expectations [bodytext] => take my hand
I will share,
my life,my hopes and my dreams

i put my trust in you
gave you my life when i was dead
gave you my last breath
in my death bed

now i'm in somewhere horrible
of your imagination
thinking of ways
to get out

i made a mistake
why i'm i so blind
is it because you took my sight
or is it because i'm innocent inside.

you let me take your hand,life,hopes and dreams
now am bringing you down with me

i hope you didin't forget
my sick and twisted mind

revenge is sweet
but seeing you dead is sweeter.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => disturbed_silence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

what i'm able to do

Contributed by disturbed_silence on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

take my hand
I will share,
my life,my hopes and my dreams

i put my trust in you
gave you my life when i was dead
gave you my last breath
in my death bed

now i'm in somewhere horrible
of your imagination
thinking of ways
to get out

i made a mistake
why i'm i so blind
is it because you took my sight
or is it because i'm innocent inside.

you let me take your hand,life,hopes and dreams
now am bringing you down with me

i hope you didin't forget
my sick and twisted mind

revenge is sweet
but seeing you dead is sweeter.

Copyright © disturbed_silence ... [ 2005-03-03 22:00:29]
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Re: what i'm able to do (User Rating: 1 )
by sapphireshadow on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:16:37 PM AEST
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Me liki this one. "revenge is sweet, but seeing you dead is sweeter": if I didn't know you any better, i would think that you were talking about HIM.
I LOVE YOU!
PS. I am saying that in my creepy voice.

Re: what i'm able to do (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:04:25 PM AEST
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this is so twisted i love it !! i love the last lines they are really the best,so horrid and evil, i love dark poems they really show talent
great poem,keep writing them !!
love han xx

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