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Array ( [sid] => 86344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Faceless [time] => 2005-03-03 15:27:06 [hometext] => No reflection.... [bodytext] => That’s me just a faceless girl,
Banging & clattering around in this world,
Needing love & needing attention,
Feeling alone in her psychological dimension.

People look but they don’t see me,
Because I am not as I am meant to be,
Always happy, smiling with not a care,
I’ve spent my life feeling nothing was ever there.

I go unnoticed for years at a time,
Never feeling as though anything is mine,
I just feel so alone & out of control,
I now know that I will never feel whole.

My reflection has long disappeared,
It has been so long since anything’s been clear,
I might as well be see through like glass,
As I am the only one sat at the back of the class.

I scream but it gets caught in my lungs,
Into the nothing my body’s been slung,
Everyone else’s face can be seen by the world,
But not mine as I am just the faceless girl.

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Faceless

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 03:27:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

That’s me just a faceless girl,
Banging & clattering around in this world,
Needing love & needing attention,
Feeling alone in her psychological dimension.

People look but they don’t see me,
Because I am not as I am meant to be,
Always happy, smiling with not a care,
I’ve spent my life feeling nothing was ever there.

I go unnoticed for years at a time,
Never feeling as though anything is mine,
I just feel so alone & out of control,
I now know that I will never feel whole.

My reflection has long disappeared,
It has been so long since anything’s been clear,
I might as well be see through like glass,
As I am the only one sat at the back of the class.

I scream but it gets caught in my lungs,
Into the nothing my body’s been slung,
Everyone else’s face can be seen by the world,
But not mine as I am just the faceless girl.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-03-03 15:27:06]
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Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 03:41:52 PM AEST
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I can see you. This is very touchy, point well described. Tiffany J.

Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 07:59:39 PM AEST
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I really like this... and everyonce in awhile I, too, feel this way....

great write.... way to capture what you truly feel

Jaime

PS I see you...............

Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:54:11 PM AEST
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oh pixie a sorrowful plea from the heart of a

longiness never 2 be quite satisfied except

on occasion, wish u well my friend. and truly

a beautiful work of poetic art . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:35:39 AM AEST
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aww pixie i use to feel this way too along time ago.I hope this depression passes.
You seem to write quite a bit of sad and emotional poem lately.
if you ever need to talk i am here sweety.
take care

Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:02:18 PM AEST
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A powerful write with wonderful rhyme and rhythum. The message is very sad and forlorn, and the emotion is very well protrayed. I hope you will risk genuine connection; and allow others to see t he inner you!

Keep on keeping on.....

Willofree

Re: Faceless (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:48:25 AM AEST
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This is sad Pixie and if it true that you feel this way you need to raise the bar on your self esteem. I don't see faceless---I see someone crying out but unsure of which direction to go in and I see talent deeply from your soul.

Believe it or not being the center of attention and having a face sometimes leaves a person feeling worthless. Because, other's can be so cruel and only look at the surface so everything else is never seen.

Just rambling along Pixie. I was deeply and forever moved by this piece.

Kie

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