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Array ( [sid] => 86326 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Coming To An End [time] => 2005-03-03 11:44:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shot through the chest
with your false lies
Bleeding from the wounds inside
It feels like I'm dying
But this can't be happening to me
The nightmares are taking over my dreams

My life is coming to an end
My memories of my past aren't
what they should have been
Death is cheating me out life
I lost it's game and must pay
the price

Laying on the ground
Looking into your face
Seeing the truth behind your eyes
Killing me with your disgrace
You decided my fate and left me
here to die

My life is coming to an end
My memories of my past aren't
what they should have been
Death is cheating me out life
I lost it's game and must pay
the price

Slipping into the darkness
The light of life is fading fast
I try and take another breath
Just to make it last
Engulfed with pain
I'm afraid I can't hold on
I'm just another memory
With a life gone [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 34 [informant] => lonely-nobody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Coming To An End

Contributed by lonely-nobody on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:44:23 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Shot through the chest
with your false lies
Bleeding from the wounds inside
It feels like I'm dying
But this can't be happening to me
The nightmares are taking over my dreams

My life is coming to an end
My memories of my past aren't
what they should have been
Death is cheating me out life
I lost it's game and must pay
the price

Laying on the ground
Looking into your face
Seeing the truth behind your eyes
Killing me with your disgrace
You decided my fate and left me
here to die

My life is coming to an end
My memories of my past aren't
what they should have been
Death is cheating me out life
I lost it's game and must pay
the price

Slipping into the darkness
The light of life is fading fast
I try and take another breath
Just to make it last
Engulfed with pain
I'm afraid I can't hold on
I'm just another memory
With a life gone

Copyright © lonely-nobody ... [ 2005-03-03 11:44:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Coming To An End (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:44:44 PM AEST
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Excellent work. Very good at communicating the emotion. Don't worry, the death won't win

Re: Coming To An End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:05:11 PM AEST
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I could hear the music in this -

Keep writing

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