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Array ( [sid] => 86302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Track Mind [time] => 2005-03-03 01:36:35 [hometext] => It has to happen, it has to.....please comment, thanks :) [bodytext] => Ever since you came back to me,
I can't get you off my mind.
I know now we are meant to be,
the love we share is one of a kind.

All day I find myself thinking of you,
my thoughts never go astray.
I know exactly what I'm supposed to do,
but the question is, what will you say?

I really don't know how you feel,
but I hope it's similar to me.
It's your breath I wish to once again steal,
with you again is where I want to be.

You make me feel whole,
you make me feel complete.
You're the perfect match for my soul,
that's why life had us meet.

I could spend the rest of my life with you,
even if I have to wait five long years.
This is something I'm prepared to do,
because being without you is the worst of my fears. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Curtisc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

One Track Mind

Contributed by Curtisc on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 01:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Ever since you came back to me,
I can't get you off my mind.
I know now we are meant to be,
the love we share is one of a kind.

All day I find myself thinking of you,
my thoughts never go astray.
I know exactly what I'm supposed to do,
but the question is, what will you say?

I really don't know how you feel,
but I hope it's similar to me.
It's your breath I wish to once again steal,
with you again is where I want to be.

You make me feel whole,
you make me feel complete.
You're the perfect match for my soul,
that's why life had us meet.

I could spend the rest of my life with you,
even if I have to wait five long years.
This is something I'm prepared to do,
because being without you is the worst of my fears.

Copyright © Curtisc ... [ 2005-03-03 01:36:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One Track Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:40:31 AM AEST
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this is a sad poem i feel your desperation

i hope u get what your seeking my friend. . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: One Track Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 08:09:59 AM AEST
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What a sad write, well writen and showing such deep emotions. Great write.

Hugs,
Jane xxx

Re: One Track Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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i liked the honesty and passion in this, could feel your sincerity. the rhythm was a bit out in some places but that's never my strong point either.

overall, a heartfelt charming poem.

Re: One Track Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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I agree, it was a sad write, and i think some rhyming was a lil forced...but who cares...lol i love all ur stuff anyway, and i know she does too!! Tanya

Re: One Track Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:24:04 AM AEST
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it is a very sad write.
I hope you get your wish.

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