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~*~your text~*~

SultryRose's Signatures

Use to think
I knew something
standing in rain.
Oh who am I
to complain?
Warm rain filled
her soul as his
cut lit
a burned out spark.

A cold chunk of
ice. Yet some how
he brought hope
to a burned out flame
before she could
remember her name.

Untill then she was
a cold chunk of ice.
yet somehow he
broght hope to
a burned out flame.

It was just anger
somehow he knew
She didn't mean
to be inflamed
deep down with
them cold icey veins.

He just wanted
to show her how
broken angels
can dance.
Leaving all guilt behind
setting free her pain
in the cold icey rain.

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COLD ICEY RAIN

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:50:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

~*~your text~*~

~*~your text~*~

SultryRose's Signatures

Use to think
I knew something
standing in rain.
Oh who am I
to complain?
Warm rain filled
her soul as his
cut lit
a burned out spark.

A cold chunk of
ice. Yet some how
he brought hope
to a burned out flame
before she could
remember her name.

Untill then she was
a cold chunk of ice.
yet somehow he
broght hope to
a burned out flame.

It was just anger
somehow he knew
She didn't mean
to be inflamed
deep down with
them cold icey veins.

He just wanted
to show her how
broken angels
can dance.
Leaving all guilt behind
setting free her pain
in the cold icey rain.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-03-03 00:50:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:44:23 AM AEST
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this is beautiful emy a poetic lesson about

love and the renewal of it . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:59:16 AM AEST
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Emy!
WOW this is just totally amazing.
Im shocked at myself for not reading your writes sooner considering the amount you comment on mine....
You are so talented.....this grasped every part of my soul whilst i was reading....

hugs

Genna x

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:48:25 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this emy, in fact it was so good i read it thrice!

johnny.

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:59:15 AM AEST
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Aww..very beautifully written..quite amazing..especially "to show her how
broken angels can dance.Leaving all guilt behind setting free her pain"..inspiring.
hugs and love my friend..:-) venkat

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:14:49 AM AEST
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You have put together a beautifully worded poem again Emy. Thank you for sharing hugs from bernard.

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 02:55:02 AM AEST
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Another masterful write, another one filled with such beautiful words, I can never get enough. This was a paticularly enjoyable read, I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:36:41 PM AEST
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one of your best emy =]

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Inside on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:39:30 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem

I read a few of yours and this is my favorite

Keep up the good work!

*hugs*

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:11:09 AM AEST
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This is one of your bests Em.

It was beautiful with alot of wisdom contained within.

Kie

Re: COLD ICEY RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:07:40 PM AEST
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This is a masterpiece! So beautiful too!

Scott

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