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Array ( [sid] => 86288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Together [time] => 2005-03-02 22:49:03 [hometext] => This is based on my fanfiction and I got carried away and kept writing and really liked it. [bodytext] => I lay awake every night waiting
Nothing comes that I can see
But you wait with me
As silent as the walls
Your presence runs through me
But I can't see you
You whisper in my ear
Sending shivers down my spine
I stand in the rain
And run my fingers across your life
As I finger your name in the stone
Tears drip off my face along the rain
The ground soaks up my tears
Carrying them to you
I sit six feet above your chest
Your osul stands in front of me
I speak to you as though you listened
But you say nothing
I don't see you
I sit so close to you but we were never further
I wait for you to come back
But you don't
Cause you won't
Cause you can't
I pass right through you as does the rain
I wash away my fears with rain
As I walk away I pray
God will forgive me for my decision
I pray for angel wings to greet me
For you to see that I need you
So as I lie there still as stone
Rain the only beat to my body
I will cry for you no more
I am with you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 52 [informant] => PoetBaby814 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Together

Contributed by PoetBaby814 on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I lay awake every night waiting
Nothing comes that I can see
But you wait with me
As silent as the walls
Your presence runs through me
But I can't see you
You whisper in my ear
Sending shivers down my spine
I stand in the rain
And run my fingers across your life
As I finger your name in the stone
Tears drip off my face along the rain
The ground soaks up my tears
Carrying them to you
I sit six feet above your chest
Your osul stands in front of me
I speak to you as though you listened
But you say nothing
I don't see you
I sit so close to you but we were never further
I wait for you to come back
But you don't
Cause you won't
Cause you can't
I pass right through you as does the rain
I wash away my fears with rain
As I walk away I pray
God will forgive me for my decision
I pray for angel wings to greet me
For you to see that I need you
So as I lie there still as stone
Rain the only beat to my body
I will cry for you no more
I am with you




Copyright © PoetBaby814 ... [ 2005-03-02 22:49:03]
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Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:49:20 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful, well done




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