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Array ( [sid] => 86256 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Do Care [time] => 2005-03-02 18:03:48 [hometext] => To a suicidal friend who's having some trouble right now..He was there when no one would listen to me, and I want him to know I care.. [bodytext] => Here lately you've been thinking
The kind of thoughts that I have too
You're startin to think its all over
Believe me thats not true

It sounds really weird
Commin from someone like me
All Ive ever wanted was to die
So I could finally be free

I told you were important
But you couldnt believe me
I used to think the same exact thing
"Important? Me..? I'll never be.."

We could learn a lot from each other
But its really hard to listen
Its ever harder to trust
But think of what youd be missin

I know you got a lot of hurt inside
I know just how that feels
Ive been through hell and back
And still havent learnt how to deal

But see, you cared about me
When no one else did
You lent an ear to listen
And now I call you my friend

And I know I cant change your mind
Cause thats all up to you
But Imma do everything thing I can
Cause, honestly..Id really miss you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

I Do Care

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:03:48 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Here lately you've been thinking
The kind of thoughts that I have too
You're startin to think its all over
Believe me thats not true

It sounds really weird
Commin from someone like me
All Ive ever wanted was to die
So I could finally be free

I told you were important
But you couldnt believe me
I used to think the same exact thing
"Important? Me..? I'll never be.."

We could learn a lot from each other
But its really hard to listen
Its ever harder to trust
But think of what youd be missin

I know you got a lot of hurt inside
I know just how that feels
Ive been through hell and back
And still havent learnt how to deal

But see, you cared about me
When no one else did
You lent an ear to listen
And now I call you my friend

And I know I cant change your mind
Cause thats all up to you
But Imma do everything thing I can
Cause, honestly..Id really miss you

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-03-02 18:03:48]
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Re: I Do Care (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:41:34 PM AEST
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So sad but true as we're only human.
When a persons past catches up with them it's hard to deal with.
Just hang in there with your friend and try to get them some help. Sometimes medicene helps.
You're a good friend to try-n-return the favor and to me that's what friendships about.
I will put your friend on my prayer list.
huggs,
emy

Re: I Do Care (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:48:53 PM AEST
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just love your friend and pray that
he/she does whats right
and its all up to him/her to choose which is right
i admire you for writing something to comfort your friend
all in all great write

catz77

Re: I Do Care (User Rating: 1 )
by MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:13:11 PM AEST
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This poem literally brought me to tears..An amazing write. I have recently lost a friend to suicide and hope with all I've got that you won't ever have to suffer through that pain

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