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Array ( [sid] => 86200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Life Of A Young Stranger [time] => 2005-03-02 02:45:34 [hometext] => A girl i only knew for a couple of days was kidnapped and murdered for walking in on a Meth-Lab in 1987. I barely knew her but she was great, and i miss her dearly. [bodytext] => I only knew you for a few days
But when i watched the news it took my breath away
I forgot to breathe when i looked at the tv and saw it was your face
They said you vanished leaving nothing but your blood to trace
You were so young and so sweet
I just don't understand why you had to face an early defeat
You had your whole life ahead of you
You were a child and so innocent too

Those few days that i knew you haunts me
It's like a disease eating away viciously
Eating away the flesh that leads to my heart
A disease so deadly it's literally tearing my apart

I just don't understand how a face so beautiful can haunt my dreams
And a voice be so much further than it seems
I've often had nightmares about the things you were put through
And sometimes i wish it were me instead of you

Your gone and there is no way of changing what is now
But i still don't understand how
How a person could do something violent
And still call themselves human without resent
Walking the earth without a care in the world
Ignoring the fact they took the life of an innocent little girl

I wish death upon no one
But i do hope and pray he pays for what he's done
His heart full of hatred and his thoughts so vile
He took away your chance at life with a smile
I hate him and i hope he suffers something far worse than death
I hope what he did rests on his conscience down to his last breath
And i hope it haunts him even in death

May your heart and soul rest in peace my dear friend
And i hope to see you again when this lifetime ends

(R.I.P Heather Kullorn)


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The Life Of A Young Stranger

Contributed by SimplyMe on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:45:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



I only knew you for a few days
But when i watched the news it took my breath away
I forgot to breathe when i looked at the tv and saw it was your face
They said you vanished leaving nothing but your blood to trace
You were so young and so sweet
I just don't understand why you had to face an early defeat
You had your whole life ahead of you
You were a child and so innocent too

Those few days that i knew you haunts me
It's like a disease eating away viciously
Eating away the flesh that leads to my heart
A disease so deadly it's literally tearing my apart

I just don't understand how a face so beautiful can haunt my dreams
And a voice be so much further than it seems
I've often had nightmares about the things you were put through
And sometimes i wish it were me instead of you

Your gone and there is no way of changing what is now
But i still don't understand how
How a person could do something violent
And still call themselves human without resent
Walking the earth without a care in the world
Ignoring the fact they took the life of an innocent little girl

I wish death upon no one
But i do hope and pray he pays for what he's done
His heart full of hatred and his thoughts so vile
He took away your chance at life with a smile
I hate him and i hope he suffers something far worse than death
I hope what he did rests on his conscience down to his last breath
And i hope it haunts him even in death

May your heart and soul rest in peace my dear friend
And i hope to see you again when this lifetime ends

(R.I.P Heather Kullorn)






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Re: The Life Of A Young Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:10:06 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwo this is powerfull and so needed in our day-n-time.
god bless u for sharing this.
I know u have much courage to write about this treachorus story.
Some it will touch and jus maybe turn umm around.
I'm so sorry for the pain u still suffer but God will see u thru.
huggs-n-luv,
emy


Re: The Life Of A Young Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:13:01 AM AEST
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This poem is sad how could some one do that
you expressed your emotions so well and this was
an excellent write

catz77


Re: The Life Of A Young Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 06:15:31 AM AEST
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This is so sad, you have writen your emotions so well.
I could feel the pain you have writen and shared here.
Thank you for posting and sharing this beautiful poem with us.

Hugs,
Jane @)->---


Re: The Life Of A Young Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:50:09 AM AEST
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sad, emotional, powerful and very deep, a combination that has made for an amazing piece of writing,
pix xx


Re: The Life Of A Young Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:07:20 PM AEST
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Very haunting poem.
Thought-provoking.

--Ghosty




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