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Array ( [sid] => 86196 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Accordance With the Plan of an Angel [time] => 2005-03-02 01:45:22 [hometext] => frustration has its grip on me [bodytext] => Every where I turn, my feelings churn and my eyes burn
'Cause all I see are hands and hearts together bound
They breathe rhythmatic sighs of love now found
I envy them and their new found treasure
that is powerful beyond all measure
And I've never been one to let it wear and tear and fill me with despair
But this time I can't ingnore it
I'm crumbling now and I abhor it

'Cause it was there in my vision, 'til I missed with great precision
And then all a sudden all of my great and wonderful intentions
seemed to fall away and left me with no hope for redemption
While all my un-born tears pulled and tugged me in a different direction
I don't know what I gotta do to find, or almost achieve, correction
I just don't undertand how it could slip like sand through my hands
And I always hate to exist
When ever I'm acting like this

But now the situations getting escalated, elevated
What's it comin' to when I don't sleep,
Hell, who am I pretending, I don't even eat
I never meant for none of this to happen
and miles away I can hear Halo laughin'
And I know he's resting easy knowing this is breezy and that nothing can ease me
So of course he's enjoying this
He is slowly destroying this... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 32 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

In Accordance With the Plan of an Angel

Contributed by stalkee on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:45:22 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Every where I turn, my feelings churn and my eyes burn
'Cause all I see are hands and hearts together bound
They breathe rhythmatic sighs of love now found
I envy them and their new found treasure
that is powerful beyond all measure
And I've never been one to let it wear and tear and fill me with despair
But this time I can't ingnore it
I'm crumbling now and I abhor it

'Cause it was there in my vision, 'til I missed with great precision
And then all a sudden all of my great and wonderful intentions
seemed to fall away and left me with no hope for redemption
While all my un-born tears pulled and tugged me in a different direction
I don't know what I gotta do to find, or almost achieve, correction
I just don't undertand how it could slip like sand through my hands
And I always hate to exist
When ever I'm acting like this

But now the situations getting escalated, elevated
What's it comin' to when I don't sleep,
Hell, who am I pretending, I don't even eat
I never meant for none of this to happen
and miles away I can hear Halo laughin'
And I know he's resting easy knowing this is breezy and that nothing can ease me
So of course he's enjoying this
He is slowly destroying this...

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2005-03-02 01:45:22]
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Re: In Accordance With the Plan of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:43:35 AM AEST
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Wow! amazing here.
Wo so powerfull that it jus lifts one up from the deep water, never did like water unless I was fishing or soaking in my hot water to relax.
this is the kindda write I needed jus now.
It's like every write tonite is angels lifting me up or at least for now.
thanks for the lift and god bless u for sharing such wisdom and power as this is a guranteed masterpeice straite from heaven.
huggs, luv, strength, joy,
emy

Re: In Accordance With the Plan of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:50:14 AM AEST
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That was really good, it could use a little snip here and there but overall the total peice was captivating.

You did well on writing this. Thanks for posting.

Jane ^_^

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