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Array ( [sid] => 86162 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Not Alive [time] => 2005-03-01 22:16:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Darkness crawling over me
Like a demon devouring me
I'm fading away to nothingness
I'm so far lost
That no one can save me
My soul has fled from my body
Every time I try to die
I can't do it
I can't kill myself
No one know's the pain
Of being dead yet not able to die
I long to end it
To run the blade across my neck
But fear consumes me
I cannot die but I'm not alive
Life is cruel to those with no life
I'm on the edge
So far from the boarder
Tetter tottering on the brink
Life is nothing
I am not welcomed in life
I am not allowed to die
The Fates are enjoying my despare
Let me be free from the awful
Amusement that I provide for the fates
Let me die.
I am tired of being the dead among the living [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I'm Not Alive

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Darkness crawling over me
Like a demon devouring me
I'm fading away to nothingness
I'm so far lost
That no one can save me
My soul has fled from my body
Every time I try to die
I can't do it
I can't kill myself
No one know's the pain
Of being dead yet not able to die
I long to end it
To run the blade across my neck
But fear consumes me
I cannot die but I'm not alive
Life is cruel to those with no life
I'm on the edge
So far from the boarder
Tetter tottering on the brink
Life is nothing
I am not welcomed in life
I am not allowed to die
The Fates are enjoying my despare
Let me be free from the awful
Amusement that I provide for the fates
Let me die.
I am tired of being the dead among the living

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2005-03-01 22:16:22]
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Re: I'm Not Alive (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:22:36 PM AEST
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This poem amazed me! I absolutely loved it. I often feel this way, except for one thing... i'm not afraid of doing it. I just always seem to be saved. Very well written.

~Alucia~

Re: I'm Not Alive (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:04:23 PM AEST
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I WAS FEELING IT, GOOD WORK. I ALSO FEEL LIKE I'M THE DEAD AMONG THE LIVING. I GUESS SOME PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND US.

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