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Array ( [sid] => 8616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Killing Me [time] => 2002-12-15 09:30:00 [hometext] => A song about having so much pain, knowing that the person you loved and trusted was using you...(you could also interpret this as being cheated on)...and wanting revenge but not having the strength to do so. [bodytext] => Your, twisted mind games
Unassisted, without names

Your, unsuspected
Undetected, senseless claims

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

Your, pathetic ways
And generic moves and plays

Your, contemptible
So unstable, a living haze

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

I thought I could trust you
To be there for me
Through good and bad
All that we had....
*Music Stops*
Well ***** you

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

Now's the time we'll be apart,
because today, you broke my heart. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 34 [informant] => flirtyrockstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Killing Me

Contributed by flirtyrockstar on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Your, twisted mind games
Unassisted, without names

Your, unsuspected
Undetected, senseless claims

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

Your, pathetic ways
And generic moves and plays

Your, contemptible
So unstable, a living haze

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

I thought I could trust you
To be there for me
Through good and bad
All that we had....
*Music Stops*
Well ***** you

Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to kill somone one day.
How could you lie, say "I love you"
I wonder why, you weren't true.
Never thought I'd feel this way,
Want to throw this all away.
-Try to kill you, and quench this thirst...
Some how you knew, and shot me first

Now's the time we'll be apart,
because today, you broke my heart.




Copyright © flirtyrockstar ... [ 2002-12-15 09:30:00]
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Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 01:06:18 PM AEST
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good poem... no, noone should ever get revenge b/c it all comes back! Keep writing


Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 03:50:45 PM AEST
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this is so good...


Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:32:56 PM AEST
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Yes, I can see this turning into a song, with this much feeling and anger it is beautiful. I have been in that situation many time as have many others, keep on writing, it's what will keep you sane! but yes, very well written! =)




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