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Array ( [sid] => 86158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Open Up [time] => 2005-03-01 22:05:19 [hometext] => Corney I know...but...It was one of my first ones. [bodytext] => Don't push me away
I'm trying to help
Why won't you open your withered heart to me?
I won't hurt you
Like all the others
I want to heal you
I know I can never give back those lost memories
But I can make new ones
Better ones
Please let me in
Dreams may fill you with lost hope
But I will give you real hope
Real dreams
Don't run away
Please don't hide
Come out of your shell
And into my arms [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Open Up

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Don't push me away
I'm trying to help
Why won't you open your withered heart to me?
I won't hurt you
Like all the others
I want to heal you
I know I can never give back those lost memories
But I can make new ones
Better ones
Please let me in
Dreams may fill you with lost hope
But I will give you real hope
Real dreams
Don't run away
Please don't hide
Come out of your shell
And into my arms

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2005-03-01 22:05:19]
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Re: Open Up (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:13:34 PM AEST
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great write... thats exactly what everyone in the world needs to hear from someone at least once in their life... i know it would have helped me out to hear that from a loved one in the past...

Re: Open Up (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:13:49 PM AEST
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Nuthing corney bout this write.
A masterpeice in my eyes but It's so much easier said than done.
huggs,
emy

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