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Array ( [sid] => 86132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rejected [time] => 2005-03-01 18:15:46 [hometext] => and yet another sad attempt at something good but I feel again it doesnt work... [bodytext] => Rejected
I'm broken
my heavy heart
bringing me down
my battle scars
lost and found
trying to erase the pain
but I find someone else
try to give it up again
end up hating myself
can't keep giving away my heart
to just anyone
breathing into the dark
my bitter song
falling into a lonely night
dreading the tomorrow
sweeping me off my feet again
my heart and mind can't follow
your eyes, they're greedy
always wanting to take
making promises of forever
apologies too late
streaming confusion
through my life
I hate you
now's your time
to leave me alone
and make everything alright
Take your charm
and feed it to someone else
there's no room here
for anyone but myself
I don't need you
I need space
I want love
but this is fake
I want to be alone
love wasn't meant for me
when I give my heart away
it always ends up breaking [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 6 [informant] => bonita2689 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Rejected

Contributed by bonita2689 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:15:46 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Rejected
I'm broken
my heavy heart
bringing me down
my battle scars
lost and found
trying to erase the pain
but I find someone else
try to give it up again
end up hating myself
can't keep giving away my heart
to just anyone
breathing into the dark
my bitter song
falling into a lonely night
dreading the tomorrow
sweeping me off my feet again
my heart and mind can't follow
your eyes, they're greedy
always wanting to take
making promises of forever
apologies too late
streaming confusion
through my life
I hate you
now's your time
to leave me alone
and make everything alright
Take your charm
and feed it to someone else
there's no room here
for anyone but myself
I don't need you
I need space
I want love
but this is fake
I want to be alone
love wasn't meant for me
when I give my heart away
it always ends up breaking

Copyright © bonita2689 ... [ 2005-03-01 18:15:46]
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Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:13:58 PM AEST
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"love wasn't meant for me
when I give my heart away
it always ends up breaking"

Yes...Something I've been through too many times. Nice work. I really enjoyed this write.

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