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When your Gone
Contributed by
jillian_phan
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:34:41 PM in AEST
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I can picture me being with you,
Fantasies of us in my room,
Making sweet love, feeling your touch..
Like an instant rush,loving the way you kiss..
Softly against my lips,
Sending me chills up and down my spine,
Thinking only of..your body next to mine,
Tasting you like fine wine.
With your fingers brushing against my skin,
If only you knew the feeling''s I have within,
No one can see, how much you mean to me..
How much I want you to be with me..
Feeling your arms wrapped around me,
Your words hitting me like a gentle breeze.
Although, your picture is all I see..
Giving me weak shivers down to my knees,
Knowing in time, you''ll be mine...
I think of you 24-7,
And without you...
I wouldn''t be in heaven.
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2005-03-01 15:34:41]
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Re: When your Gone
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by yodyrite on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:41:01 AM AEST
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| a couple rhyming errors... spine wine mine... and the over use of "me"... but the subject was very nice and the story was great... |
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