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<<<~~Cheveyo~~>>>

<<<~~Spirit Warrior~~>>>

SultryRose's Signatures

She neva cared who
she hurt. Left um layin
in they own dirt.
Sure she could please
um in the sack
cook um bisquits
and neva lookon back.

She was demon walkin
ready to kill. She'd
walk right over um
as soon as they said
luv. My God, so much
torment, the stars above.

Married men, were her
target, her very aim
When the little girl aimed
Oh god that little girl
was tottally insane.
They called her hoe
but she knew it untrue.
she neva had no money,
did u?

She was a man eater
many lives destroyed
When the little girl
aimed to destroy.
At 50 the flash backs came.
She faced that demon,s
name.

When remembered a uncle
she thought no wonda
he went insane

a story based on true facts.

.
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SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

<<<~~Cheveyo~~>>>

<<<~~Spirit Warrior~~>>>

SultryRose's Signatures

She neva cared who
she hurt. Left um layin
in they own dirt.
Sure she could please
um in the sack
cook um bisquits
and neva lookon back.

She was demon walkin
ready to kill. She'd
walk right over um
as soon as they said
luv. My God, so much
torment, the stars above.

Married men, were her
target, her very aim
When the little girl aimed
Oh god that little girl
was tottally insane.
They called her hoe
but she knew it untrue.
she neva had no money,
did u?

She was a man eater
many lives destroyed
When the little girl
aimed to destroy.
At 50 the flash backs came.
She faced that demon,s
name.

When remembered a uncle
she thought no wonda
he went insane

a story based on true facts.

.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-03-01 06:22:53]
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Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:27:54 AM AEST
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Very beautiful poem. Very beautiful women. Please look at a few of mine thanks. Keep it up is that you in the pic?

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:43:39 AM AEST
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A story well told, and the haunting music adds to the overal feel. Nice.
Stitch

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:54:58 AM AEST
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Nice story, but work on the grammar. I like the music too.

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:09:18 AM AEST
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Very nice writting emmy, sorry 4 your pain i
wish u well, keep up with the writting it's all we got, though i got a feeling they'll take that away 2 soon, . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by xrockstheheart on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 12:44:37 PM AEST
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this is a good poem emy and the picture of you is really sexy. i am powerless

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:05:43 PM AEST
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You rock girl.
A very powerful, strong write Emy.
Sorry for the pain.
I love your way with words. Keep them coming for i'll keep on reading. Great work

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by the_mouse_that_roared on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:45:12 PM AEST
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This had such a human feel about it. A very powerful poem. Great job

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:03:09 AM AEST
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Boy Oh Boy this is very powerful stuff Emy. Very Pretty young woman in your picture. 5/5 everytime from me hugs bernard.

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:03:06 AM AEST
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wow that was a very powerful punch there.
an amazing write .

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:41:18 PM AEST
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This is really powerful.

Scott

Re: SHE WAS A DEMON WALKIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:38:52 PM AEST
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Powerful write and intense emotions. Expresses a lot of pain and anger. I hope she is now at peace with the situation/events

Masterfully written
Willofree

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